Didn’t want to believe the reviews that Taylor went back to the prt after betrayal because this was a good story to read. But it’s painful reading this you even went with whole jaded aspect but then as soon as Taylor “had no choice but to follow prt or jail”, she basically reverted back to before being betrayed and lack of spine is killing it for me. Would have been better just to have been a rogue or independent doing her own thing and occasionally clashing with prt and her own psyche, one side trying to be the hero she wanted and the other becoming a child of ash

I'm out. It seems pretty apparent by this point she's not going to be growing a spine or standing up to the protectorate for what they did, she's just going to keep doing as she's told...

It's pretty grating to watch her declare empirically that she is done with the Protectorate and PRT after their betrayal, incompetence, and corruption. And then proceed spend the next 3 chapters as their lapdog, fully compliant as they test her powers and build weapons designed to use against her, send her on patrols, and dictate every second of her day, and then tell her how she isn't "PR friendly" and she needs to change. After their action or inaction directly led to ALL THREE incidents that they're using as justification for keeping her prisoner and changing her image.

I hope she grows some backbone here pretty quick because this is hard to read.

Took me a while to get to this considering I didn’t know what Worm was when you released it.(thanks for exposing me to that btw) The triumvirate fighting dark souls bosses was so cool to picture. The leviathan fight was also epic. Thanks again for another great work.

amazing. i know chances of this being updated or "finished" are non-existent but i'd love it if it was.

That said, this is still a PERFECT place for it to "end".

HOLY FUCK OK I ONLY HALF-SAW THAT HAPPENING

feels like every characters personality was rewritten it feels very off when I read it . awesome it hard to get into the story

wards introductions chapter of this story felt way too peppy and wrong like reading about different characters

how big is your. erosion of Brockton 2 hours is ridiculous

Noice, also; Velstadt's name doesn't ring a bell? That's a great pun... even tho i was a few chapters back...

Fuck I wish there was more of this.

Though I suppose it could be the end to, as it is a very satisfying last chapter

This was an incredible story, It is unfortunate it seems dead

da fuck? beginner's range of one fucking mile? that's beyond the best, beyond beyond what canon taylor had, which is the most efficient power to ever exist, she literally dont get tired and still the range is 4 blocks at most not close to 1 mile for a beginner...

so while fighting, more ash is created constantly! while she rampages and the heroes attack more ash is created by just melting the environment...
when new wave "contained" her when she emitted fire that would just allow the heat to rise even further because the heat stays contained and continue to rise? later on yes the oxygen would be missing and the fire would die I guess...
can containment foam contain brutes above five? surely not survive the heat of burnscar? truely?