This is a good story so far. I hope you continue to write it.

Dunno what to feel about this chapter... Last chapter ended with Neji pissing his pants in fear of Naruto's Curse of Hatred or something. But this chapter has no mention of it whatsoever. Instead, we start with Neji smiling and smirking! What?! And does Naruto not know anything other than Mokuton related Jutsus?!

"Tap talk" between Naru-Hina and subsequent "help" felt a bit far-fetched. Especially when Naruto having such ability wasn't established earlier. For them to execute something like that on the spot so effectively without barely even interacting with each other before was rather hard to believe.

"Drunk talk" between Naru-Sasu on the hand was hilarious! Also Sakura being appreciative of Naruto without ever being hostile to him is refreshing to read and I wish more writers would do it.

Wow. Does Lee know Neji at all? Defending him as a teammate is one thing, but spilling all of his fiercely guarded personal secrets so openly to the guy he just met? Simply not done.

This story started to be really interesting but unfortunately didn't manage to live up to it...

I don't get why some writers insist on portraying Naruto acting uncouth even when his upbringing is so different from canon. I mean he spend Three years under Tsunade's watchful eye living at Daimyō's palace for god's sake. Yet here he is, picking his nose in front of Hyūga Mansion no less...

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A pity this seem abandoned...it was a really interesting fic.

Well, that wasn't ominous at all...

One of the better chapters...

Meh. Not really feeling much for any of these characters. All feel massively underdeveloped...

That felt... rushed. Sakura suddenly 'loving all three so much' came out of left field. Same with Naruto suddenly calling on Kyūbi's power so openly for everybody to see. Feels like the writer skipped a bunch of important stuff.

Whoa... did Jiraiya kidnap Gaara? Probably after saving his life I'm guessing...

Hentai? Whores? From supposed 8-9 year olds? I can at least fathom Naruto, but Hinata?

Enjoyable first few chapters... though not really enjoying the brute force training approach...

While it’s relatively well written, the whole entire thing is shit… there’s too much dancing around and it really feels like you’re trying really hard to make him into some cry baby bitch with a cringe edgelord personality. As for the faggot reviewer below me, I have actually written multiple stories with more likes, follows, and hits. It’s called actually being able to write a decent story plot without resorting to some dumbass cop out cliche. Go fucking suck start a shotgun your cuck bitch.

I really don't know why there are so many hate comments on this story. Like bro, could you write a story like this with plot and all?! No? Then shut up and don't criticise someone for a "bad story" when in fact the story is better than your whole life. This story is hella good and the author has to decide what to do with his plot and noone has the right to say that they should change something because it isnt "good enough"!