spell check is sometimes not your friend

Why do I read your works when you always do this? I guess it is time for the 'next' story. *theatrical sigh*

Rather odd happenings considering this is a sort of soul time-travel fic. But still entertaining.

Crazy, but GREAT Story! Thanks!

This was a really good fanfic till you basically mad harry a little b*tch who get fuk over by a god or (ancient). it just becomes insane after that the plot make no sense things just start happening randomly.

This was a great story, then it got confusing before slowly becoming great again, then it became confusing again and at least for me stayed that way till the end. Still would recommend a read, but be prepared to be confused.

It's a wraith, not a wrath, you moron.

Okay, first of all, even though I have issues with the story, I must say that it was a very good one, and it was finished, which rases the love just that much higher, and the dislike for how it unfolded just that little bit lower, which is a good thing, I think... Now, as to what I find a bit disconcerted about, is the fact that you managed to somehow make 3 Harry Potter stories into 1, and although I can agree that it DID work, well, let's just say that I think that each time Voldemort died could have been a good enough ending, and whether good or bad, I kept thinking "oh no, not again!" Every time he was forced to go back in time, with nothing but a half baked reason given, that apparently, in the end was because Dumbledore didn't die as well as Voldemort on the same day?

Also, while we're on the subject of Dumbledore, why didn't the "ancients" call for Dumbledore's soul earlier? I mean, seriously, Harry and his girls find that to be a good suspicion, that Dumbledore did something to piss off these "ancients" yet, if any of the story characters said anything about an actual answer that wasn't guesswork later on in the ending, I must have missed it, and I for one would like to know. Another thing, if I'm supposed to take the whole story as fanfiction "Gospel Truth" then (and maybe this is just me) I think that there should be more than just a "they probably lived happily ever after, the end", once riddle and Dumbledore were destroyed or whatever. I mean seriously, it doesn't even sound like you're sure both Dumbledore and riddle are dead, as Harry just apparently sucked their magic out of them then boom they're magically considered out of the picture.

Look, I'm sorry to be complaining, as I honestly really did like this story, and I don't like taking a chance that someone thinks I'm being rude or something, because I seriously try hard not to be, and if somehow you think I am, then I humbly ask for your forgiveness, but that ending just has me scratching my head a bit, for those reasons given above.

Speaking of, I would have hoped that the business of putting his wand in his wive's holsters, considering that both Harry and one wife have elemental abilities, and there's a possibility of passing that trait down to his offspring...

All that aside, I would like to thank you for such a good story, and despite the issues I have it is good enough for me to favorite this story, so again, thank you very much!

Your spelling in the last paragraph is atrocious.

"Trader" should be "Traitor, and "Quittage" should be Quidditch (though since you've spelled Quidditch correctly so many times before, I don't know how you got it wrong this time.

I can’t go on. The story has gone off the rails. There was such potential and it just stopped making any since somewhere around 23

Why do you use a language you don’t understand. You do realize what you wrote in Arabic was utter gibberish right?

some of the spell check typos are pretty funny. Voldemort with his head sticking out of a turbine. Hermione and her truck.

Cockwise? WTH is that?

enjoyable read

Thanks.