Reviews for A Werewolf and a Veela Walk Into a Pub |
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Maraudersgal1989 chapter 19 . 7/16/2017 have you abanded this story i hope not i love your stories :) |
aj344 chapter 19 . 6/20/2017 oh i wish you would finish this one I love the plot I don;t know that I've ever read a werewolf Harry before! |
mrsdarcy45 chapter 19 . 6/15/2017 I like all your stories and I'm excited to see you move between ships. I started reading as a SS/HG shipper, then HP/HG, then Twins/HG. I think you see my trend ... ?/HG. Just wondering if this one is abandoned? Keep writingthoroughly enjoy your work. Have reviewed before as a guest but then learnt how to log in! |
Angel Cauldwell chapter 1 . 5/27/2017 I do enjoy you as one of my favorite authors for you write great Harry and Hermione fanfiction and have interesting plots around the pairing. As well having them do fun things and making it believable. I know I comment about what I think of the Draco and Hermione pairing before and that if the plot is well done and if the relationship is believable that I would read the story. That is why is one reason I stopped reading your stories since you changed your pairings, because the relationship between Draco and Hermione was unbelievable as well as the the plot of the dabble you did when Hermione went to Harry to talk about her relationship with Draco. But that is not the solely reason that I stopped reading your stories. After a few chapters into this story that Hermione's and Harry's relationship becomes unbelievable. For many reasons, throughout the story that they try to come into terms of being a werewolf and a veela. But it is more likely they are trying to control the Veela and the werewolf, unlike with your other stories of when they are both werewolves and Hermione is a veela but Harry isn't a werewolf. The two stories I am talking about is Harry Potter and his Veela Mate as well as the Besuty of the full moon. They are believable because Harry and Hermione accepted of what and who they had become as well as having help. They also shared their worries and everything, but with this story you make Harry seem weaker than what he is and him trying to control his wolf but at the same time he is trying to accept the wolf. It is the same thing with Hermione but you make her into the utterly perfect Mary Sue character. Of which is not her character. Yes she is smart, I am not going to deny that becomignna Veela would make her different. The thing is this, unlike with your stories before this stories that the characters are not as relatable as they were. Of which made wary of reading your Draco and Hermione stories with this story once you did the dabble but I read it to see what you did. But I couldn't connect any of the characters in the dabble, even though I was half hoping for it. I just wanted to explain better of why I stopped following you. I still gladly read the stories you finished before you made this one, for those are the stories that I enjoyed and looked forward to you writing about. I do hope one day you go back to Harry and Hermione. |
AMMiss chapter 19 . 5/21/2017 I really look forward to more of this. This story is brilliant with the plot line and the character's. :) |
AMMiss chapter 3 . 5/21/2017 I like this Dumbledore. He's pretty awesome! :) |
coffeecoffeecoffee04 chapter 19 . 5/17/2017 Just wondering if this is abandoned or not, cuz it's a really good fic! |
Fallow53 chapter 19 . 5/11/2017 xxx Kudos xxx : ) |
Nagraj chapter 1 . 5/6/2017 You were one of my favourite author in hp/hg romance fiction and I get it you hate weasleys mainly Ron but seriously Draco Malfoy with Hermione why because he is a bad boy, to me he he is a light version of Ramsey Bolton and if Voldemort would have won do you really think he would be a better person no he would torture al the muggle born and if Harry didn't get Hermione than Ron is the next better man a thousand times better than malfoy. And once again Draco is not Bruce Wayne. |
Proud Harmonian chapter 6 . 5/5/2017 Good chapter. Although I do have a couple issues, one it should be 2.5 million pounds not 1.5 million. Also I disapprove of Hermione's view on sex before marriage. Mine is sex is only appropriate between a husband and his wife. |
TheSilverboar chapter 8 . 4/11/2017 Hermione making Harry quit Quiditch isn't exactly all that fair. All sports can be dangerous and it's far less dangerous than their adventures. Plus its one of the few happy outlets he has and has had at Hogwarts. That would be like him ordering her to give up her pleasure reading because he gets worried when she spends too long at it and forgets the world around her. |
Abrom chapter 19 . 4/7/2017 I miss this story! Hope you return to it! |
Ada1229 chapter 17 . 3/29/2017 What I think George could have been thinking when Fred appoligized 'Well that's understandable I suppose. Up to this point we have done everything together. Fred not ever suspecting that we would want to different things with our lives is understandable. I suppose I could forgive him' |
Mannnysbookdragon chapter 19 . 3/21/2017 Ok just finished reading what you have, and I need more. Are you going to finish this story? I really hope so. |
rellenh chapter 19 . 3/18/2017 I love this story but is it finished? If not, let me know so I can unfollow it. Thank you. |