“so I reckoned I should get a bite to eat before the food was all gone”…“Ron wasn't exactly the most articulate person” Err… I agree with the second part, so I think Ron wouldn’t have used “reckoned”… ;-)

“Apollo gazed down at the girl he'd chosen at birth” Oh? Reminds me of something… (It was not that long ago that I read “Harry Potter and his Veela Mate”… ;-p)

“Your dad is cool” Bwahahahaha! Indeed! Especially considering it is all about the BOYFRIEND of his daughter! ;-p

“You're going to the United States this summer?” Bwahahahahahaha! Excellent! I’ve never read any story using that idea before!

“he and a few others like Amelia Bones kept their eyes open and stopped things from afar, like the books” Interesting idea, here… Though… If they were ready to do that, I think they would have looked for Harry during his childhood, to ensure he was al-right…

I like the idea!
Though, to be honest, it looks like you just mixed the starting ideas of “Beauty of a Full Moon” and “Harry Potter and his Veela Mate”…
But I think I like the idea of them both being a magical creature, but with a whole different set of problems, contrary to “Beauty of a Full Moon”, where they have the same problems, and can deal with them together.

I hope to read more soon!

(Oh! And: Is there a reason the title looks like the beginning of a joke?)

great start i cant wait for more

Brilliant brilliant start!

Got rid of Ron. Check.
Get Harry away from the Dursleys over the summer. Check.
Get Sirius a fair trial. In Progress.
Discover the extent of Dumbledore's manipulation and/or betrayal. Pending...
Got Hermione and Harry together with hint of steamy hot sex to come. Double Check!

So far, its looking very good. Please keep up the good work.

This is GREAT. I can't wait to read more!

Thank you for dumping Ron - he was always a jealous, ignorant and very lazy prat.

Yay a new story! And this looks to be a good one!

Awesome first chapter. I love the concept and can't wait for more. Always fun to see Amelia take a front seat as well.

cool start.. moooooooooore please -()-

Sneaky and clever. I like that about your take on Hermione and Harry. And it seems Amelia Bones and Rufus Scrimgeour have a bit of that as well. Good qualities, especially when you consider the depths of corruption and malfeasance they will all be sorting through in one way or another.

Ooooo I like the good yet pragmatic Rufus. I always thought he'd make a good good guy. I can't wait to read more, I'm liking this one.

I LOVE the prospect of Harry's getting a proper education.
Yay! for more students than just Hermione and Harry being made aware of Ron Weasley's bigotry.
Harry's new werewolf patronus sounds fierce, in the best possible sense of the word.
Yay! for Harry and Hermione noticing that the Weasleys were benefitting unfairly from Dumbles's nepotism the exact same way that the Malfoys are benefitting from the ministry's.
Yay! for that anonymous letter to Amelia Bones. Double Yay! for her figuring out who wrote it and getting Rufus Scrimgeour involved in the investigation.
I LOVE that Scrimgeour got that cease and desist order preventing Harry Potter based fiction.
Yay! for Harry deciding to end his so-called friendship with Ron.

A new story! Yeah! :)
So, either you don't like Lupin or he is the perfect victim when you need someone badly wronged by authorities and doesn't (want to) see it ;)
But I'm curious about what you'll do about the werewolf thing... How "your" werewolves will be compared to the beasts created by the Ministry? And I can only guess that you made the Veela something different than basically beautiful women ready to seduce any man passing by...
So, let's go for this new story! I like the beginning, good situation grounding :) (err, I don't know if that's actually an expression, but I hope you get my meaning ;) )

Hey ginny was controlled by the diary, a small eleven year old girl can not make good defence against the spirit of a diary but I agree hagrid should be cleared for that