Reviews for The Brightest Witch and the Darkest House
Molenir chapter 56 . 3/25
I've really been enjoying this story, but the last chapter really bugged me. You've made Dumbledore so weak. This is the man who in canon, went toe to toe, non lethally against voldyshorts while protecting bystanders, and gawkers, and still kicked his butt. All voldys DEs, are nowhere near as good, yet he still barely feels out a win against a scrub.
majere4 chapter 78 . 6/22/2023
Fantastic! Brilliant work, thanks so much for sharing your time and talent!
majere4 chapter 71 . 6/22/2023
Incredible job with character and world building!
I'm very impressed by the use of the escaped de's to keep up pressure / sow chaos.
I'm wondering what's going on with malfois sock puppet and the rich, inbred sheeple "governing" the common, mildly less inbred sheeple.
I'm also a bit confused by padfoot, but, I'm hopeful he won't be the whiny, petulant lapdog once Harry explains some hard truths (and their rather damming recorded info from the rat).
I am sorry I've not reviewed more, but I am very impressed with your storytelling, thank you!
majere4 chapter 20 . 6/20/2023
Wait, her father isn't just accepting everything? He's asking intelligent questions and demanding rational answers? Heresy! Well, Canon HP Heresy...
majere4 chapter 19 . 6/20/2023
Oh, shite! A murder attempt is one Helluva way to finish the year!
And quite a lot more likely than the total non-reaction the Trio enjoyed in Canon.
Scary stuff, but very realistic. Well done on year 1.
majere4 chapter 3 . 6/20/2023
Wonderful job managing the OC within Canon events. I'm really getting into this!
majere4 chapter 2 . 6/20/2023
A solid opening with an interesting MC. No obvious Mary Sue 'powers' and she has my favorite attributes: curiosity driven by focused intelligence. The family dynamic is good so far as well... very intriguing story setup!
thebestofall chapter 2 . 10/10/2022
This is nice. I like the organic development here. Slow, methodical, but we are gaining much insight into the sort of character that Valeria is.

I also can't explain why, but there's a charm to the the writing. Perhaps because it doesn't feel rushed, but neither is it dragged out too much.
mumphie chapter 22 . 8/15/2022
I'm surprised that Val didn't wonder about magical inheritance and have a test done. I'm surprised that her mother thinks hiding the truth even with her daughter being magical is a good idea.
mumphie chapter 10 . 8/15/2022
Why didn't she go home for Christmas?
Atheist God chapter 78 . 4/5/2022
Not sure if people do read reviews before reading the story but I have to say it's worth the time. It's interesting, well written and it simply "catches" you. Have fun
Cesar17 chapter 33 . 3/21/2022
good chapter
Cesar17 chapter 24 . 3/20/2022
good chapter 28 and good story
Spica75 chapter 71 . 11/22/2021
M2, most famous gun recently? Kalashnikov AK-47/AKM takes that spot without the slightest competition.
Spica75 chapter 59 . 11/22/2021
Seriously? That's not training, that's blaming the victim and telling them to keep their heads down and assume that the bullies will stop CHOOSING to bully. "Ooh, but you stand out, that's not allowed!" "You talk back, clearly that's not allowed!"
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