Amazing story! I really loved your characters and the original plot points. Wished you continued the sequel

That's some anime level of season finale. Really overcomplicated and slow as snail. Also, can mermen actually walk? I thought they ain't got no legs.

Mf reintroduced Humanity scale from Vampire the masquerade

Can we get that redheaded witch girl a name? Besides impersonal "multi use sacrifice"?

Fucking bait and switch scheme, longfic marked as complete but it's around half done and abandoned during sequel. Why mark it as complete? Why not say in a/n that isn't standalone book?

Now we're truly entering the AU. Helpful professor?! Not canon!

I really like this story, it reads as Wand for Skitter fanfic, but MC is not veteran level experienced here. So coincidentally the plot doesn't skip merrily just because bad guys keep nailing themselves on her. This one's read much slower.

A factual mistake, I think? Sirius thinks HP is starting his second year, when it s should be third. Or is this in-universe dementor exposure?

Wow, what a twist. So if it wasn't Val, then who the diary somehow got into opening the Chamber? I would think she would notice any memory loss episode like that.

Really disappointed that everyone in year 1 forgot about Wormtail. He didn't stop being pink, I expected the Weasel to take him to adult shop would recognise an animagus. He was actually told to do that by Valeria! And then nothing.

Also, if you're replying to reviews in A/N, mind quoting the original reviews? You're not using PMs, so others would appreciate a context.

Ugh. Don't even mention Hermione's parents. Really, for a mudblood, Herms was incredibly racist against muggles. Hey parents have zero say in things, we never learnt their names even and as soon as they became inconvenient for her, she memory wiped them and dropped them off half across a world in Australia without any input or consent from them.
The only difference from some Muggle baiting at that point is that she didn't torture and/or kill them, but that was cold.

Wow, so Flamel gave her a make-your-own-philosophers-done kit as an inheritance since they don't have kids? Noice.

I like that out-of-the-box thinking for main character. With that, I do wonder, will HP go to Dursleys this summer or will she have something to say about that?

Yes, thank you! Thank you!
The entire canon and literally every single fanfic have this Filch who's a menace and the only option is to run away! Finally, finally someone just threw a hex into that bloody cat instead. Was it so hard?

Fuck yeah, that's some good shit.

So, what, we do not have Hermione Granger here, like, at all?