Reviews for The Brightest Witch and the Darkest House |
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![]() ![]() ![]() /Oh no! Say it ain't so! Hopefully Pettigrew's attempt to flee will fail. Yeah, Lupin is one of the most disappointing characters. However, I could understand why Harry might care. /Wait, so Harry also had patronus lessons without Val? |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Hilarity ensued." /Ooh, very sneaky. I like you. I'm upset that you had to spell it out, becausw it's obvious in hindsight what she did. I mean, I might have caight it as I definitely saw the hint, but now I'm not aire. Oh well, I am so glad she did it. the way she did. I hope he doesn't escape from them. That happens far too often, in my opinion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() /Ha! I find Pettigrew's situtation to be quite humorous. /I wasn't sure that Val had anything to do with Pomfrey until your AN. Shouldn't there have been more blowback from that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() /This and the last chapter bith seem a bit disjointed as mentioned in Meneldur's chapter 58 review. Perhaps it will all be wrapped up with acbow in the next chapter or two, but I must admit I am a bit confuzzled. |
![]() ![]() ![]() /I also appreciate the critism of professir Burbage's view that isn't blindy the WW is better! Or, vice versa. |
![]() ![]() ![]() /I loved professor Vector's lecture! Perhaps it's my bias, but I rarely see stories that go into the details of magic that could make sense in totality, rather than just a fanfic with nebulous rules. |
![]() ![]() ![]() /Ah, I see that Snape is not the only one that sees an old alumnus in young Valeria. /Ew, Draco, keep it in your robes! Just kidding; probably just standard political maneuvering. Wait, standard political maneuvering does include personal relationships, as well. Hm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() /Somehow, I think Val with the Timeturner and contract-enforced rules will still be more dangerous than Hermione with only a spoken oath. |
![]() ![]() ![]() /Hm, Smith's crush is totally reasonable. XD That makes this the first time I might find the character tolerable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() /I would've wrote tons more reviews, but ffn is acting iffy. Most of my other reviews were written hours before I was able to post them. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() /Very nice. I would have left more reviews, but ffn was acting iffy. The few reviews that did post were written hours before. /Bollocks to that! Valeria should have laid into Ron for not replacing his wand. What's money between friends and saving their lives vs. endangering them? /It also seems weird that no one noticed that his spells were still shoddy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() /That was se- I mean cool. That was pretty cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() /... I think I like Valeria more than Hermione. I love new crafty ways of handling things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() /Well, well, well, is Lucy trying to harm or help? I suppose he wins either way. Wonder how soon Valeria will figure Tom out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() /Wow, I've rarely seen these issues taken this seriously without *handwave* muggles are better, and the WW is bombed, and Harry marries the queen, or something. /Good job, so far. |