Reviews for The Brightest Witch and the Darkest House
jon reeve chapter 69 . 9/28/2020
/Oh no! Say it ain't so! Hopefully Pettigrew's attempt to flee will fail. Yeah, Lupin is one of the most disappointing characters. However, I could understand why Harry might care.

/Wait, so Harry also had patronus lessons without Val?
jon reeve chapter 64 . 9/28/2020
"Hilarity ensued."

/Ooh, very sneaky. I like you. I'm upset that you had to spell it out, becausw it's obvious in hindsight what she did. I mean, I might have caight it as I definitely saw the hint, but now I'm not aire. Oh well, I am so glad she did it. the way she did. I hope he doesn't escape from them. That happens far too often, in my opinion.
jon reeve chapter 60 . 9/28/2020
/Ha! I find Pettigrew's situtation to be quite humorous.

/I wasn't sure that Val had anything to do with Pomfrey until your AN. Shouldn't there have been more blowback from that?
jon reeve chapter 58 . 9/28/2020
/This and the last chapter bith seem a bit disjointed as mentioned in Meneldur's chapter 58 review. Perhaps it will all be wrapped up with acbow in the next chapter or two, but I must admit I am a bit confuzzled.
jon reeve chapter 51 . 9/28/2020
/I also appreciate the critism of professir Burbage's view that isn't blindy the WW is better! Or, vice versa.
jon reeve chapter 50 . 9/28/2020
/I loved professor Vector's lecture! Perhaps it's my bias, but I rarely see stories that go into the details of magic that could make sense in totality, rather than just a fanfic with nebulous rules.
jon reeve chapter 49 . 9/28/2020
/Ah, I see that Snape is not the only one that sees an old alumnus in young Valeria.

/Ew, Draco, keep it in your robes! Just kidding; probably just standard political maneuvering. Wait, standard political maneuvering does include personal relationships, as well. Hm.
jon reeve chapter 48 . 9/28/2020
/Somehow, I think Val with the Timeturner and contract-enforced rules will still be more dangerous than Hermione with only a spoken oath.
jon reeve chapter 47 . 9/28/2020
/Hm, Smith's crush is totally reasonable. XD That makes this the first time I might find the character tolerable.
jon reeve chapter 45 . 9/28/2020
/I would've wrote tons more reviews, but ffn is acting iffy. Most of my other reviews were written hours before I was able to post them.

Thanks for writing!
jon reeve chapter 42 . 9/28/2020
/Very nice. I would have left more reviews, but ffn was acting iffy. The few reviews that did post were written hours before.

/Bollocks to that! Valeria should have laid into Ron for not replacing his wand. What's money between friends and saving their lives vs. endangering them?

/It also seems weird that no one noticed that his spells were still shoddy.
jon reeve chapter 33 . 9/27/2020
/That was se- I mean cool. That was pretty cool.
jon reeve chapter 24 . 9/27/2020
/... I think I like Valeria more than Hermione. I love new crafty ways of handling things.
jon reeve chapter 22 . 9/27/2020
/Well, well, well, is Lucy trying to harm or help? I suppose he wins either way. Wonder how soon Valeria will figure Tom out.
jon reeve chapter 20 . 9/27/2020
/Wow, I've rarely seen these issues taken this seriously without *handwave* muggles are better, and the WW is bombed, and Harry marries the queen, or something.

/Good job, so far.
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