Reviews for Red Flame
Rus21 chapter 1 . 3/13/2022
Skimmed through the story,

And basically Every main character's are gay and Ron is a bigot that can't stand Kim being Gay. So he gets out casted and Kim is now close to her rivals, cause they're females, even Bonnie, because she's Gay.

This would make me straight up made me a Bigot, just reading this.
I kinda get Ron at first, but then Yori be like, "you just a Bigot, get over yourself". Never did I red Master sensei's wisdom on trying to help Ron to move on (if there was, then my bad since I just skimmed through this) . Like the next time I see Ron's part he was with Monkey fist. After this I just turned my brains off, and just searched On what happens next, while all the other characters are on their daily life, like Ron never existed in the first place (I guess there were some mentions, but it's all about "it's probably a good thing".). And when Ron disappeared, guess what? Kim and Bonnie who were rivals even before Kim knowing Bonnie's situation (Sisters and Family), were now close. But I guess Ron and Kim here we're never friends in the first place as Will said, who is also gay, Kim was always a slave of the Hierarchy system.

I also hated Ron's representation here, firstly, Emotion Sickness was thrown out of the window, where he was the one who didn't want to ruin their Friendship and broke up with kim, but here they should be together with His "Kim", like, I get it that Ron would fucking lose his shit Off after Kim saying their kiss was meaningless( it was for publicity, you know childhood friends kissing in prom), then became depressed because She tricked, stringed, and was forgiven because she was Gay. Like what? You kissed your "friend" just because.

Ron came back and gets shit piled on, But Oh fucking Boy, revenge and shit isn't good, but I fucking hoped that was the case here, and literally would become a madman and have a speck of zorpox in him. Well, he did became a "madman". I'd rather have Ron being put in jail, become unhinged, get over Kim because he got manipulated, and cause World domination after going out or even think ideas while being in jail. But, we'll just have Ron know what being a gay means. Like I lost my mind there, Getting tricked, shit piled, and gets Life sentence in prison, while Shego gets to be a teacher even though, she had so much sentences even have 12(forgot how many) countries trying to capture her ass. While he did kinda deserve some of that, I'd still pick a plot where he'd become a number 1 villain.

But I guess this ain't about Ron, Lmao.
Sorry for shit posting or Flame reviewing. I don't have against gay people, but this is literally every Kim/Shego or just Kim/Female characters fanfics are and how they're trying to justify Kim's infidelity or Kim being a Gay is, just make Ron a bigot, call him crazy, destroy his circle of friends(while it is only small or I guess nonexistent) and isolate him because he is a straight man.

There is a story that wasn't as bias and more nuanced than this, rather than just "Ron's just a bigot he needs to get over himself, and stop deluding himself", as if he was the cause of the Kiss incident where he got stringed on by Kim. But I guess we can just blame it on her "Kimness".
BunnyGirlErika chapter 25 . 11/2/2019
I hope you eventually finish cause it's a really good story but if you don't then at least I got to read and enjoy what I did.
BunnyGirlErika chapter 13 . 11/2/2019
I am very concerned because Rebecca was hit with that laser still I hope she doesn't start to get sick.
BunnyGirlErika chapter 12 . 11/2/2019
In the show I don't think they ever really talked about Shego and her brothers parents or really much about what there child was like. I really wish they would have done a team go spin off not only because would have been awsome but also because we could learned more their past and gotten to know more about them.
BunnyGirlErika chapter 10 . 11/2/2019
Ron you dick.
BunnyGirlErika chapter 5 . 11/2/2019
Okay the attitude Rebecca gave Bonnie was just flat out funny. Even though she's a clone that is her own person it's apparent that certain things like the attitude she gave is just genetic lol.
jackyfloresq2001 chapter 25 . 7/31/2019
can't wait for the next chapter in this story
Andreina Cummings chapter 25 . 3/1/2019
Awesome story please continue writing it
Gabriel Swanson chapter 25 . 7/18/2017
this hasn't been updated in almost 2 YEARS! Why is it that EVERY fic I love to read is either rarely updated or is left completely unfinished! I don't know why these AMAZING WRITERS do this to their fans and readers! It's both confusing and very FRUSTRATING for a lot of people, including me! Why would you put off something so amazing instead of giving them what they enjoy so much!? In my opinion, it isn't right to leave it alone for 2 years and suddenly work on it some more! My grandfather told me to 'finish what I start before I do something else'; and now I'm telling you the same thing! I absolutely LOVE this story, but I want to see it actually FINISHED! Is that to much to ask for? I just cannot STAND it when people do this to their fans! If I wrote something like this, I'd try to update it at LEAST once a week; but, I'm not you and I'm sure you have problems of your own to deal with. And if I insulted you in any way, I'm sorry; and I'll keep reading until I see 'the end' on one of the pages. I still love this story, and I'll support you the best I can, but I want to see the end of this story! and when you're done, I'll read the next story you write. And even the next after that! I hope you know I'm gonna support you for a LONG time; but first PLEASE finish your story 'red flame'! You kinda left us with a cliffhanger! I'm sorry if I insulted you in any way, and I'll keep reading you're stories until they're ALL finished!
Pyra Simp chapter 25 . 8/9/2016
Ending a chapter with a cliffhanger and not updating for a year isn't cool.
amerdism chapter 25 . 2/14/2016
Awesome story, I hope to see more soon, when's the next chapter going up?
striker072 chapter 25 . 8/4/2015
And yet another version of Hego that I hate for being a grade a JERK! Hope he get torn a part along with his dad.
Molly Ann Burch chapter 24 . 7/31/2015
Hurry up with chapter 25 so I can read it
fullmetalalchemist26 chapter 24 . 7/15/2015
Kind of nice bit of fluff to get away from all the drama/angst!
micknutson9 chapter 24 . 7/15/2015
"Yeah, that guy's an asshole," Miller said to Will when he turned back around. "So's his cousin."

LOL! I loved the classic Spaceballs reference that you put into this chapter. Loved that movie. Anyway... Keep up the good work and I can't wait until the next chapter.
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