Reviews for Payment in Blood
Clockwork Witch chapter 1 . 2/11
3. Days. That's how long it took me to read it. I loved almost every second of it, and I do feel that comments were right. The story is amazing but the ending isn't too satisfying. I'm not sure where I would end it, but I am content with where you had it.
little-maniac chapter 6 . 8/30/2020
I've read this story back when it was still a WIP and i have to tell you this.

When people ask what my favourite book is (i have read many), i always tell them about this story.

After years, i can't forget about it. this fanfic was the first piece of gore i have ever read and it. is. delicious.

i remember the first time i read chapter 6 in bed before going to sleep, the cold sweat, the absolute fear, it was awesome.

i can't forget about it. this has made more of an impression on me than any other piece of literature i have read, ever.

anyway, chapter 6 is the most vile and disgusting piece ever and i fucking love it, and it is my first love of the gore genre.

thank you for blessing my eyes (lol) with this fic and i love you for haunting my memories.
REALITYKEEPER chapter 36 . 2/16/2018
um, excuse me... this needs more
Yfii chapter 17 . 12/24/2017
Fuck. Preston. Northwest.
Anti chapter 11 . 12/23/2017
Would... review...can’t stop...reading...
Anti chapter 2 . 12/23/2017
Tears. Tears happened.
Unicornglittercats69 chapter 1 . 12/14/2017
it was truly amazing. I recommend the read. spoilers: the ending isn't very satisfying. but everything else was amazing
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2017
Love this 3
Amaikurai chapter 36 . 5/8/2017
can't believe I read this in less than two days, it was going to be one but I started yesterday late at night, lol. And I loved each moment going through this fic.
The way everything is developed is marvelous. This for sure the type of stories I love to read: slowly, coherent, and descriptive. Seriously, I literally scream like a girl who sees her favorite superstar when Bill and Dip kissed for first time, it was so adorable. But at the same time I admire the way you wrote all these gore scenes, I think I can easily become your fan(if I am not already). And you know what? At the end I mostly agreed with Bill, you get the character in so perfect. Evil, but kind(only with Dip actually), honest, moral(obviously in his certain way). Excelent, this fic goes direct to my favorites in my chest of literary jewlries.
P. S: Sorry for any grammar mistake, English is no my first language. Lol.
P. S.2: Would you mind if I translate this fic into Spanish? We can talk about it, if not that fine. I just would like other people to fall in love with this fic as I did.
cucumberpigeon chapter 36 . 4/14/2017
Oh damn this was the best thing I've ever read! Really good job!
cucumberpigeon chapter 9 . 4/10/2017
damn they really like to roast each other
Tatumn chapter 6 . 2/13/2017
This should be on wattpad the comments would be killer! I have a vivid imagination, the eyes...why?
Tatumn chapter 8 . 2/14/2017
KillingMyMind chapter 10 . 1/19/2017
"I knocked them out. Too much trouble. But cats are chill."

So true, and even though I have both cats and dogs, I am definitely more a cat person.

I am loving this story, btw. A few chapters ago, I thought I sensed a bit of Dexter Morgan in Dipper...very cool.
KillingMyMind chapter 9 . 1/19/2017
"A toy Poodle, a Chihuahua, and a Pit Bull."

" out for the Poodle."

That is hilarious! I was dyin''s so true! XD
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