Reviews for Multiverse |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved EVERY single chapter you wrote. Hilarious. I was trying sp hard to not laugh out loud.. I think I suceeded. Just bearly. Chrom and Robin are just adorable together. |
![]() ![]() I've read all of your stories. The IKEA Robin from Ch.4 is my favorite. Keep up the good fanfics and I luv u. :) |
![]() ![]() I have to admit, this Robin is pretty amusing, being the king of dramatics... and then you had to hit me with the angst and a cliffhanger. Which, as much as it hurt, was still wonderful... Personally, I find I'm liking the Robins from chapter two, five, and 3/6 best, but all of them are quite fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What. You do not end with a cliffhanger like that! Can you continue this one, please? I have to know what happens, or I will explode with curiosity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm REALLY enjoying Politician Robin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What I liked about this chapter, was the fact that Drama Lord Robin is really a lord of drama. The characterization is entirely up to you, and I believe that you've done really well - even if it seems kind of exaggerated at times. But, in my opinion, you seem a bit too focused on Robin and not on the other characters (such as Chrom and Lissa), and as such the dynamics between Chrom and Robin doesn't show as much. I believe, (and this is really just pure opinion and suggestion) that if you could take more time to build up your scenarios and add more depth to the characters then it would be great. The chapter was rather choppy and not as interesting, but it was just enough that I enjoyed the short read. Also, will this chapter be made into some sort of a two-shot? Man, I'm not such a fan if these kind of cliffhangers. XD. I guess, it's nice that this isn't what I was expecting? LOL. You're the writer, don't apologize to me. If the chapter is not up to expectation, well. meh. Good work! P.S. Hope, I didn't sound too know-it-all or what have you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes. All my yes. Democracy!Robin and Ikea!Robin are great. Can you satisfy the shippers with Ikea!Robin, please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO too many feels D: |
![]() ![]() I really love these one shots! All of your versions of Robin are so great. Thanks for sharing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pffffffftt. Glorious. I'm going to be snickering whenever someone mentions democracy for the next few days... Also? Really love what you have going here - it's a bit weird to read each chapter one after the other when they're all different Robins, but all the different glimpses into the might-bes and could-have-beens and what-ifs that are Chrom and Robin...well, I think it's fantastic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter yet again, but IMO the chapter falls a bit flat and feels bland. It was an enjoyable read nonetheless. And if we're going to be talking about a Robin you should return to , it should be the robin from chapter 2. |
![]() ![]() Okay so I just read all 5 and all are adorable and awesome! I actually really liked chapter 3, I wouldn't mind more like it. I really, really loved chapter 4. Idk, I love Modern AUs for reasons beyond me and it was perfect. Yes, perfect lol. I'm not going to request more of them in particular if you don't feel like writing them again, just more modern ones. If everyone else is cool with it. Pretty please. :D |
![]() ![]() Really good, you had the characters done quite well, and portrayed the awkward feelings Chrom has very well. |
![]() ![]() Interesting chapter, I like the way you carefully portray the relationship and build it up. Could use more actual dialogue/interaction between the two rather than just the thoughts behind them. |
![]() ![]() This was really funny, I like the twist ending and everything. |