Reviews for Multiverse |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The dialogue in the chapter between the Shepherds seemed especially good. Your way of wording things can just be so hilarious, even when it's not in main points. Ricken "throwing his dignity to the wind", calling Robin "the Voice" like he's God I'm so glad I found this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think your romance is great! I said "aww" quite a few times this chapter, but it also just makes you smile. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm normally not even a fan of humor-fics but this actually has me cracking up at 1 AM. Nicely done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I reread your story again, and fell in love (again). And promptly remembered that I didn't favorite it- why didn't I favorite it? Anyways, it's hilarious. The first chapter, with Chrom's snide comments made my day. Really, he's such a bright guy- but with that Robin with him- it can't be helped, I suppose. B.R. was an excellent touch. Now, this chapter, with Robin and Chrom starring- even though I know what it was about- still caught me off guard. Excellent actors, I love them. I love how you write Robin. |
![]() ![]() HI goodness gracious I cannot wait to login I must type now I didn't want to ramble but this chapter left me with so many feelings? so much hope and I knew he wouldn't couldn't find Robin the first time but it was still such a sad feeling when he didn't. despite this chapter being self-indulgent, and agonizing to write, it's beautiful - I love it. i love this chapter a lot. it punched me in my emotional face and I love you for it, please keep writing keep at it, this is worth it and it's amazing. i really love what you're doing with the multiverse robins. okay tis time for study for me, too, but seriously this made my day. this chapter is the best thing i've read in a long time. thank you for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I already read all fifteen chapters but I'd like to comment on this one, because I am so entranced with "weird but smart" Robin. She's so unique and hilarious, and I love the way you portrayed her character interactions. I would definitely like to see her in future chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww this was so cute! I loved it! I hope they realise one day who they really are :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god, now I do feel awful it's been so long since I left you a review! And I've been reading all the new chapters you post...Sorry! I've been loving them. The special was so awesome, reading about the previous Robins in one story was so funny and warm and Chrom being all confused about the modern world is absolutely hilarious. And the Robin from previous chapter, I loved her! she's so funny and dear. I would love to read more about her. And for this chapter, I really really like this versions of Chrom and Robin, it's refreshing to read the friendship in this modern times but at the same time I'm all "goddammit, kiss already!" ahahaha. I love them! Hope you've been doing great, I've been waiting for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() This was wonderful. Easily my favorite interpretation of Robin that you've done and I'd love to see another chapter of her. |
![]() ![]() Love it! We need more mRobin x Chrom! |
![]() ![]() Okay I did NOT see that one coming. Absolutely hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me before reading this one-shot: :D Me after reading this one-shot: D': Oh, don't get me wrong, I have a certain fondness for your AU versions of Chrom and company. But that last bit just hit me right in the feels. I just... kind of relate in an a lost-my-dad-when-I-was-young kind of way. Then there's also those parts with Chrom and... and yeah. That probably speaks a lot about your writing though, you managing to make me feel all these emotions. I'm also a bit of a sucker for road trip-related kind of stories, so coupling your amazing writing ability with that, this new addition to your collection of one-shots is amazing. I look forward to what your brilliant mind can come up with next! P.S. Seriously, you writing about future!Ylisse is totally giving me plot bunnies right now. THEY WON'T STOP HOPPING. GOSH. |
![]() ![]() i really like chapter 3, it?s so sweet Hoping I could see more of it |
![]() ![]() ![]() It would be interesting to see them interacting with a now 4000 year old tiki |
![]() ![]() I love these little stories, and I'd love to see more of Chapter 3's Robin. I kind of connect with him, tbh |