Reviews for Multiverse |
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![]() ![]() Cool chapter dude. Would it be possible to get a continuation of chapter 6 ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not like I've ever been on a road trip, so maybe I'm a little less enthused after reading the chapter than usual. But it begins and ends on very nice notes. Solid chapter, not really my favourite ever, but I still rather enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you write them as BFFs here, and everyone treats Chrom as much of a dork as in game. The premise of an AU that's not an AU at all and is in actuality a future Ylisse is super cool. You don't have to work in references in a weird way, and technology is integrated naturally. (The only weird part I thought was the Mario Kart joke, considering that if there was Nintnedo, you'd think there'd be Fire Emblem.) I like that not much actually happened. It felt like I was along for the ride, pal-ing around with Robin and Chrom. The events were all very fun, with Chrom as the goofy one and Robin as the straight man. The ending with the trading cards made me wonder...are they Einherjar, per chance...? That'd be cool. Chrom and Robin meeting their past lives, and watching previous Chrom and Robin talk with reincarnated Chrom and Robin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Chrom and Robin are quickly becoming some of my favourites among your collection. I'm glad you decided to post this chapter after all, because it was very interesting to read. Halfway through, I forgot it was a one-shot and got sucked into this particular world XD Just goes to show how good your writing is. Looking forward to whatever you write next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, i like it. Well done, nice exploring of the theme of this particular Robin. Thank you for writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() In which I realize yet again that High Deliverer Robin never came back and oh god Chrom- *sniff* I have too many feels. I love how Chrom and Henry interacted. Zombies, hah. Also, at least this time around Validar wasn't a fanatic bent on resurrecting an evil dragon by using his daughter as a vessel? A nice improvement. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing! Can you do a chapter with romance in it next? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure whether it was your intention or not...but I am *totally* going to assume and say that the green-haired woman that Chrom accused of acting like they were in Mario Kart and blew a raspberry at them as she passed was Nowi's reincarnation :P I mean...considering all of the other reincarnation coincidences in this particular part of the multiverse and how she was acting...who else could it be? This particular 'verse is quickly becoming my favorite one, it's always a pleasure to see it visited again, I wonder if either Chrom or Robin will ever put the picture together that they're reincarnations of the originals...or if they'll figure out that those are Einherjar and actual tome of some kind of lightning/thunder magic that Robin inherited, and more importantly, that they actually pretty much *are* a couple already at this point XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 14 Robin is... a bit suffering from the stress, but I'd like to see more of her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahaha I love this whole story and every Robin you've written. Glad to see the potential return of chapter 3!Robin, and a Harry Potter AU would be amazing. I hope you keep updating because this story is simply amazing and I look forward to reading more of your lovely writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah no... yaoi dislike or notm this one is also absurd cause lucina. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Serious buisnes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love all of these stories! My favourites are the ones that involve romance between Robin and Chrom, but they all make me smile. Chapter 4, Chapter 5 and Chapter 9/12 are also especially brilliant. I'd love to see more of Chapter 4's Robin. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this was so, so cute! I loved the parallelism with their real universe, like when Chrom said that he'd broken the lamp. And as I really ship Chrobin, this was really fun to read. It was also very well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "We've been over this before?" "We did?" "Wait no we haven't" God I love how they're both such huge dorks for BFFs. |