Reviews for Multiverse |
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![]() ![]() WHOA this robin/chrom pair is a lot of fun! i'd love to see more of this robin (ch 9/12) because I'm really invested in this now. while i personally see this relationship as platonic, i think you do a nice job of writing it so that it could be romantic as well! by the way, i just read all of these chapters in one go so i'm pretty impressed with the stories. this one, and ch.5 are my favorites. also drama queen robin! please keep it up, i'm really liking this (as someone who both romantically and platonically ships chrom with male and female robins)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've been asking what Robin's we'd like to see more of, this is one that I'd like to see more of. I'm curious to see how her relationship with Chrom would play out and what might happen along the way now that he's been married to Olivia and the all the kinds of a drama a love triangle like this would cause... |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're doing amazing on the romance chapters, they're some of my favorite ones in this whole mess of one-shots :) You do the whole cute and fluffy feelings very well and you can balance it with the right amount of seriousness and/or angst if needed to. Keep up the good work :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe, nice twist there :P I wasn't expecting it to be something as silly as a snowball fight, the way you started it honestly had me thinking it was some sort of alternate timeline where Grima had been in control of Robin all along or some other similar notion, very well executed little ploy. And I liked how you worked Robin's and Chrom's critical hit quotes in there as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loves thisssssssssss. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhh, I'm so excited to see a return to modern Robin and Chrom! There's not enough of it. And half of it is high school au which isn't a bad thing but like... I want variety lol. I liked the snippet style of this one. And all the references to the game! Whatever your self indulgent story is I say post it because I'm greedy and I want more of your stories lol. If you do continue to write more I'm obviously going to ask for more modern aus. I won't mind whether you do or don't. But thanks for what you have written so far :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yayyyyy, you're alive! again! did you wake up on a lab table, to the sound of thunder, or did you have to claw your way out of a grave? hee. Anyway: I loved this chapter, all the little touches of friendship in such a lighthearted setting. Looove it. Even the parts that were not quite so lighthearted. Thank you for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pffft... what I got out of this, Gaius. Gaius never changes. \_(ツ)_/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh, I usually don't like modern AUs, but I like the idea of Robin and Chrom being reincarnated in a world that's very similar to ours, but with Awakening having happened in the past. If you want to continue this mini-story, maybe you could do something with Einherjar. After all, legendary heroes have Einherjar, right? I'd think defeating an evil God would give you an Einherjar! Though I don't know if the cards would survive over a few hundred years. But then again, they ARE magic cards... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you're probably not updating this anymore, but I just wanted to review anyways. The Robins in this story are so, SO funny. Seriously, snarky/asshole Robin is my favorite thing in Fire Emblem Fanfiction, and yours is chock-full of witty Robin. I laughed, out loud, at least three times per chapter. This was fucking great, dude! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oooooooo i didn't know you had made this chapter! It's awesome, this Robin is hilariously awesome, and you are pretty awesome for writing this, too. Gushing, much? oops. Doesn't mean it's not true, though! Thank you for writing, i hope you haven't forgotten and/or dropped this! |
![]() ![]() hilarious. |
![]() ![]() nice red herring. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy cow, these are all really good. There's a lot of variety and that is always a plus in my book. I think all of them are amazing and I can't really pick one. Chapter 1/11 is a whimsical yet crazy genius. Fight club Robin in 2/8 was hilarious. The numerous ones with sad undertones were genuinely heartfelt and the optimistic ones even more so. I also enjoyed the AUs simply because they were different from the norm. If I had to pick one to return to, I'd do IKEA Robin because the utter hilarity and overall tone was appealing. Plus I frequent IKEA for kicks. I know the horrors and joys of that place. Otherwise I would like to see awkward Robin from Chapter 7 or Diplo-Robin from Chapter 5 wreck the court again. Great work on delving into the many layers these two can have! |
![]() ![]() I just can't get enough of your work. It's absolutely brilliant, and can leave anyone crying their eyes out or doubled over laughing on the floor. It's so amazing, you're my new favourite author. |