Ugh your stories hurt so good :(

I read this last night and I kept thinking about it so I just had to review. My heart was just breaking for Bella. I don’t think she intentionally set out to destroy Edward’s life. She just wasn’t okay. I think everyone of us has gone through a phase where our darkest selves show up because of emotional trauma.

P.S. I hate Edward but I love this story. I wish you’d continue this story.

I just finished it and was scrolling through the comments. I can't believe I'm the first Reading it while in quarantine. I really felt the void and the emptiness you portrayed in Bella. this was an exquisite One shot. totally worthy not catching any sleep through the night.

There must be more.

Wow I didn’t expect that

Holy moly... you definitely know how to pull the heart strings! So tragic, life events and no communication, things could have been different if people are honest. So sad for all these people, now everyone’s hurt. Thanks for writing and sharing

Wow!

Whoa... this was quite a ride. I’d love to read more of this. Are you going to expand it?

Www...Edwardand Leah. Gross

I REALLY WANTED BELLA ,EDWARD BACK TOGETHER DIDNT YOU?

Iforgot how captivating your writing is! THANK YOU

Tragically amazing! TFS :)

x

Parts of this hit home for me. The loneliness and the obligations. SO f'n sad.

Gorgeous story! Fucking heartbreaking!
Thank you.

very well written, but it was also one of those stories where none of them are innocent, and all four of them had their faults, the only innocent ones were the kids, other then that, all four adults were all guilty of their marriages not being what they could be.
you can make a great marriage horrible or a horrible marriage great, it depends on how bad both of you want to make it work and much effort if put into it.