Reviews for Deviations
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22
Damn! That was equally hot and emotional! I guess there isn’t a sequel in the making.. that would be so darn awesome!
eight percent chapter 1 . 12/26/2016
That was great. And kinda hot. **** the carpet, indeed!
Zebrastreifen chapter 1 . 11/3/2016
I loved it! Extremely in-character and well-written!
IceCream Junkie chapter 1 . 5/16/2016
First of all, thank you for sharing this story and feeding my current guilty pleasure by doing so. ;)
Your story is very well written and I enjoyed reading it. I like the idea of Barba avoiding Olivia and being all tongue tied when he realises that he has feelings for her. I generally like to see a different, softer (maybe even a little insecure) side of him when it comes to his feelings and your idea fits very well with that.
Last but not least, this was by far the hottest kiss I came across in a fanfic for quite some time now. Kudos!
tiCocoChanelle chapter 1 . 5/14/2016
I do like this idea too, for me they got a special relationship!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2016
Excellent work. Please write more.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2015
I love this idea too it seems like sort of thing barba would do
MotherTucker chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Please write more Barson! I need something to get me through hiatus!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
Please write more Barson!
untapdtreasure chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
Gahh. This is wonderful and everything i want them to be. Oh man! Thanks. I love her in his space. So hot.
ADazzlingConspiracy chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
ohmygod. I need to write oneshots. or do some tumblr prompts. I must become fully immersed into the ship that is already ruining my life. Words can't express how much I love this!
I should creep on your tumblr and read more of your stuff. :-)
c0ntxgious chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
I loved this! Great writing and description, I haven't read SVU fanfics in a while and I think I might have a new ship after this story lol. Good work!
thelisa17 chapter 1 . 6/2/2015
This... This is great! And you are right! He would totally try to run away. Great story! Please write more.
Cfhonan chapter 1 . 6/2/2015
This was awesome. I have really come to like the Barson pairing. Hope you write more.
NYPDliz chapter 1 . 6/2/2015
I absolutely loved this! Are we looking at a one shot here or can I look forward to more of this great idea?