Reviews for Little Black Rain Cloud
The-KLF chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
Fun case!fic, I enjoyed this :) thanks for writing and sharing!
Moochiecat chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
This was interesting, but too long and a bit "over the top." Too "talky, talky." Would have been easier to follow the characters if you had divided it into 3 or 4 chapters.