|Reviews for Sidewinder|
| XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 1 . 12/5/2020
Basic sentence structure seems messy and there are noticeable grammar errors/typos throughout.
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/8/2020
One of the, if not the best Harry Potter and RWBY fic I have ever read
| loulloko chapter 4 . 9/19/2020
I have never seen a Harry edgier than this one holy fuck he reminds me of a autistic neckbeard mixed with an emo angsty teenager
| Onishin Tsukitenshi chapter 5 . 6/9/2020
I honestly think that agoraphobia would be a better excuse than anthopophobia. A fear of being in situations where one feels exposed or helpless would be a better cover than a fear of crowds and people to let Maine to always be wearing his armor.
And once again, if you have time to change your name from Rage Addiction to T Kareon, it means you probably have time to update your stories, so please do so.
| Jacob Phantom chapter 7 . 4/27/2020
Please update your story soon!
| ankitmahat chapter 3 . 4/17/2020
Your Harry Potter character is really inconsistent and his thought process changes at the drop of a hat. It's rather annoying and I'm starting to wonder if reading this fanfic is even worth it.
This story started well enough but from there onward it has started to go downhill. Especially in the recent chapter in which he let's Yang assault him and call him name without doing anything and is being all mopey about not being a team.
Please get the personality of your MC straight the next time you try to write a Fanfic.
| OpTIC FaZe chapter 1 . 2/19/2020
I noticed harry is a lot like Accelerator from A certain magical index so I just say awesome and great job love this story.
| Chyllen chapter 3 . 11/20/2019
Yeah that's not Harry Potter not even close Snape is an ass hat and your character is close too being an ass hat . Any who your character IS NOT Harry Potter I could accept him as Harry Potter if you didn't go all vague on his past of how and why he acts like a emo version of Snape
| BrewstrMcl chapter 3 . 5/20/2019
I generally read for enjoyment. This story is well written but not my "cup of tea" so I won't continue to follow along. My only comment is that the protagonist, Harry is pretty much an asshole, I tend to identify with the main character and I have no sympathy for any of the individuals in this story. Good Luck.
| stylo1 chapter 4 . 2/6/2019
i really dont understand why you make your crossovers between more than 2 fics, more like 6 fics. it really doesnt add anything.
well start was interesting though a little light on the magic part, but now with the different crossovers i lost interest, oh and harrys speaches are not profound or enlightning they are just useless ramblings
| stylo1 chapter 1 . 2/6/2019
you seem to have amassed a rather large collection of unfinisht stories, there is even a varation of this one that isnt that old. some form of add perhaps?
| stylo1 chapter 1 . 2/6/2019
going to beacon as an outlet for his powers seems rather strange.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2019
Erm, given Harry's character here, and how Ozpin is essentially Dumbledore's clone: manipulative chessmaster bastard. I reallly don't see this Harry agreeing to go to Beacon.
| Dominion of chapter 1 . 11/19/2018
Yeoch! I cut myself from trying to read this. Far too edgy for me.
| StonerMcWeedPot chapter 5 . 10/9/2018
No... please don’t remove Yang from the pairing ;(