|Reviews for The Black Secret|
| gryphonsson chapter 38 . 10/7/2013
Just wondering - does the black-camouflaged-by-white thing really work?
| gryphonsson chapter 10 . 10/7/2013
You're not Sirius, you're Awahili. :D On another note, great fic!
| mysinger chapter 49 . 7/24/2013
A very enjoyable story, full of twists and turns and great characters. Thank you.
| ThereIsWhovianOnYourPotterhead chapter 31 . 5/29/2013
Great story and I will review again but I wanted to say I think that if you left it at "Behind you Harry whirled and came face to face with..." It would have been a better cliff hanger. Keep writing!
| animefreak728 chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
I would have liked it if Severus had used his claws to at scratch Harry's uncle the face. It'd be a constant reminder.
| animefreak728 chapter 2 . 1/19/2013
I like the idea of Severus' animagus form being a black panther. They're one of my favorite animals. :D
| TenebrisCor chapter 49 . 1/16/2013
This was amazing! One of my favorite Severitus stories without a doubt.
| MichaEllaRhine chapter 49 . 12/14/2012
I've been reading this for hours now! It is almost 2 in the morning and I started at 8 this evening! It was just so good though and I had to keep going to find out what happened. I am now sighing in contentment and randomly laughing as I remember some of the funniest parts. Just brilliant. A fantastic piece of work.
| Mathlover4 chapter 48 . 12/10/2012
I just finished reading your story and I love it! This is one of the best Severitus fics I've read. My favorite parts are when you included Covial/Lupin!
| Despoina. Tiko-chan chapter 9 . 11/20/2012
I think Remus Lupin is acting like Sirius Black calling Severus Snape git and all that!
| x chapter 28 . 10/26/2012
I'm enjoying the story so far. You do have a bad habit though. Whenever someone speaks or thinks, you put another person's reaction in the same paragraph. It is constantly confusing, and very poor English. I have to reread a lot of the dialogue and the secret dialogue just to understand who is reacting in which way. I know this story would take too many hours of work to fix, but I hope that in future stories you will write things correctly from the start. Overall, I'm impressed with your plotting, characterizations, and the dialogue, which appears very natural. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading the rest of your stories when I finish this one.
| Guest chapter 48 . 9/29/2012
Nicely done! I loved it!
| Guest chapter 47 . 9/29/2012
Crud. I was really hoping that Severus would be able to help more. Great job!
| Guest chapter 46 . 9/29/2012
I was wondering about the apparation thing. Nicely done!
| Guest chapter 43 . 9/29/2012
Nice chapter! Great job!