| Reviews for The Black Secret |
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  Guest chapter 7 . 8/31/2024 Why would Harry need a new wand when he dug it up from the Dursleys backyard in chapter 3. He pointedly told Snape that they were unable to burn it and the cloak so they buried it. Parts of this chapter contradict that chapter completely. |
| Oh dear chapter 8 . 4/15/2022 Very nice premise, absolutely awful execution. There was no need to keep changing pov, makes it difficult to read. I think I’m giving up here. |
| Oh dear chapter 4 . 4/14/2022 This is set in the UK, we don’t have bears living in forests. Please do your research. In the UK what you call a yard, is referred to as a garden, and we don’t have back porches. What you call a porch, we would call a veranda. A porch is a small room on the front of a house, covering the front door, often referred to as a storm porch, a place to store wet outer wear. I doubt many businesses would have ‘camp outs’ for their staff either. |
 Ghostwriter chapter 48 . 2/5/2022 Awesome job. Wonderful story. |
| baileebradford8 chapter 35 . 1/24/2022 is the answer to the riddle tommorow? |
| Moonclawtatts chapter 1 . 10/20/2021 They are a British family, Lays is not a British thing. We call them walkers crisps, and wieners are called hot-dogs (in the bun) or sausages. Please at least try to sound British when using British characters. Other than that it seems to be a serviceable story. |
| krichmond2 chapter 49 . 6/2/2021 This is probably the tenth time I have read through this story. I love it so much. Thank you for writing it and then leaving it on the site. Its one of the few stories that I have been able to re-read over and over. Thank you! |
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/17/2019 I'm so glad you put hermione with harry! I always thought they should be together |
| Melody chapter 17 . 5/30/2019 I wish it wasn’t hermioneXharry but other than that everything else is good, idk why but their relationship really sets me off |
| Guest chapter 30 . 2/24/2019 Warn people! It is a dirty rotten evil trick to suddenly turn this into a riddle solving fic at chapter 30. I'm so disappointed. You could have turned it into a horrible song-fic, and I would be equally frustrated, because I'm losing all interest in reading, even though the first 29 chapters were OK. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/21/2019 LOL. Good surprise! Great sense of anticipation. |
| Sweet Shy Suz chapter 49 . 2/11/2019 I really enjoyed this story, but I am a bit confused at what Snape did to the Dursley's. What did happento them? |
| xTCatxx chapter 2 . 12/8/2018 Ooooh cool I just love it that you used a black panther as his animagus form! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/20/2018 There aren't any bears in England! |
| bmad1965 chapter 6 . 4/7/2018 wth is half missing |