Reviews for Unexpected
coyg81 chapter 23 . 6/6/2018
That was so hot! I love the way you made them fumble around a bit. That’s really good writing. Rather than the smooth sailing first time sex for Hermione I read about in a lot of fics, this felt more natural. Great job
coyg81 chapter 22 . 6/6/2018
Ahhhhhhh! OMG *must read next chapter immediately...
coyg81 chapter 21 . 6/6/2018
Eeek! Hope it isn’t all going to go to shit when Blaise appears!
coyg81 chapter 20 . 6/6/2018
Amazing chapter. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Poor Snape. You can’t help but feel sorry for the man
coyg81 chapter 19 . 6/6/2018
I know Snapes good but how the hell did he find out where they live? Wonder what he’s going to do. It’d be good if he supported them both
coyg81 chapter 18 . 6/6/2018
I really hoped there would be one chapter from Hermione’s POV and this was excellent. I hope they stay together and she doesn’t just leave him. Really enjoying this x
coyg81 chapter 17 . 6/6/2018
Awww... fuck, I love them so much! Fantastic chapter x
coyg81 chapter 1 . 6/5/2018
Eeek! That was so intense and sweet and damn that elf for turning up at the wrong moment!
coyg81 chapter 16 . 6/5/2018
WOW! Just, wow! AMAZING chapter! Anguish, grief, the kiss... so many emotions reading this. Fantastic work. Love it
coyg81 chapter 13 . 6/5/2018
Don’t know about Draco’s face hurting from smiling but mine definitely is after that chapter. They are so sweet and cute together.
coyg81 chapter 12 . 6/5/2018
They are so cute together
coyg81 chapter 10 . 6/5/2018
Awww, they’re getting a little closer
coyg81 chapter 9 . 6/5/2018
Oh my heart... poor Draco. Hermione comforting him was so sweet
coyg81 chapter 8 . 6/5/2018
Oh gawd... god, Lucius is a monster!
coyg81 chapter 7 . 6/5/2018
Oh Draco, he’s breaking my heart. Love this story so far x
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