Reviews for A different weasel makes a difference
Guest chapter 4 . 6/16/2015
Another good chapter keep up the good work :)
MasterOfDragonsGod chapter 4 . 6/16/2015
Nice setting the stage for more to come :)
Matt Quinn chapter 4 . 6/16/2015
Well at least Tyrion is keeping Joffrey from randomly killing people...
Truth Is What You Make Of It chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
Please fix the punctuations.
wingofpain chapter 3 . 6/15/2015
It's interesting but the only downside of your story is that I feel like reading a history book (but a really interesting one)
Guest chapter 3 . 6/12/2015
Frostflame for Jon Snow a shadowcat sigil

Shadowflame for daughter line of Blackfyre

If Aegon isn't a real Targaryean Young Griff is qualified to rule

Stannis is the only other one who puts the needs of the realm before his own the rest are deluded fools who fight for personal glory and power

His problem is he doesn't understand that almost anyone will believe almost anything, they will believe a lie is the truth because they want it to be true or because they are afraid it might be true

He should stop talking about his rights and start talking about how he is the best man for the job, that he always does his duty unlike the others

Stark forces rape pillage and burn just as much as their Lannister counterparts

Mace Tyrell would strangle a thousand babies to death with his bare hands if it meant putting Tyrell blood on the Iron Throne

The blood of the Riverlands is on Catelyn's hands as much as Gregor Clegane and Tywin Lannister's, her efforts to protect her children only put them in greater danger and all that other death

Balon Greyjoy wants revenge more than gold, he blames the Starks and the North for costing him his crown and his other sons and is too stupid (like most people) to see it was Stannis destroying his fleet that cost him all that

Robb is a great general he wins every battle but loses the war because he completely fails the diplomatic side of things, there is more to being a lord much less a king than winning all your battles he's wise beyond his years in some ways but still young in others to a lesser extent so is Dany

And how many innocents will Arya murder for her freedom, someone needs to tell her of the realm’s need for stability, and unless she wants to go beyond the Wall and hunt and kill for her daily bread, she must also do her duties as a Lady of her House as the Mormont women do, work is called work not fun for a reason, in short she doesn’t get it both ways
Matt Quinn chapter 3 . 6/13/2015
In canon is Renly's reputation as a warrior that bad? I knew he fought in the Tourney of the Hand and lost to Sandor Clegane-and then he showed some honor and class by giving him one of his gold antlers as a token of respect.

I do remember some criticism of the TV show for making him into a stereotype (i.e. he manages Robert's social calendar and is squicked at the sight of blood), but in the first book (it's been a VERY long time since I've read the second and third) I don't remember him having a bad reputation.
Revan3363 chapter 3 . 6/12/2015
Good chapter, cant wait for more :)
MasterOfDragonsGod chapter 3 . 6/12/2015
Nice chapter.
Matt Quinn chapter 2 . 6/10/2015
Well, it looks like Roose hasn't started expending the soldiers of non-Boltons or Bolton allies yet, if his battle is that desultory.

Just how bad a commander is Edmure Tully? He was able to defeat Tywin in canon, although holding river crossings is easier than holding an open field. He's not exactly the sharpest knife in the drawer, but I imagine he's not a complete moron either.

Keep up the good work.
MasterOfDragonsGod chapter 2 . 6/9/2015
Nice so Jaime lost is hand early:)
Revan3363 chapter 2 . 6/9/2015
Good chapter, so is Roose Bolton still going to betray Robb? Cant wait for more :)
Revan3363 chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
Good start, like the idea, who are the 8 kings? cant wait for more
MasterOfDragonsGod chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
Matt Quinn chapter 1 . 6/7/2015
MerryPrankster from the AH forum here, dropping in to be your first reviewer. A promising start to what I know from your posting elsewhere will be a fun and interesting alternate timeline.

One quibble-finding a husband for his sisters will be a lot easier than finding wives for his brothers, since Stevron can always offer large dowries with each woman. Think what Walder did in the canon timeline with Fat Walda-offered the bride's weight in silver. The resulting husbands might be disproportionately poorer, but at least they'll be married off and out of the Twins.

Also, if Stevron isn't a class snob, perhaps he allows his brothers to marry the sisters, daughters, etc. rich commoners? That might allow them to set up independent households elsewhere, have military jobs appropriate for nobles (some merchant's "sworn shield"), and said rich commoners might like additional connections with the nobility. Although I know much of the story has been written already, something to keep in mind for later...

Another quibble-you seem to put a space both before and after commas. You don't need to have a space before the comma, just after. The current situation makes it less readable.

Keep up the good work!
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