Reviews for Sins: The Evil You Create |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know about deleting it but I have enjoyed reading this story even if I was quite late to read it. Thanks for the story and I plan to read it all the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've checked the new story and I liked it. Now I hope to see some more development as Danny goes on as for the harem I'd like to see how the girls fell for Danny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! Yes that was a great movie. (stares at you for reasons you already know) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel sorry for you feeling like this story is not well. but it is your decision as a writer and if you are making the rewrite better then YAY :D but their is one point I must really curse you out on, and that is deleting this with the BIGGEST cliffhanger ever on fanfiction ): but good luck with the rewrite, I like the changes you have planed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! |
![]() ![]() Sound like a good plan |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for the reboot! |
![]() ![]() Dude come on finish atleast one story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will he still have ghost powers? |
![]() ![]() Take out raven it is overused and she betrayed him in rhe original. That jus kill them relationship for me. Evrybody else can stay though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well those are nice and I look forward to see how you do the rewrite. I have a good idea on who hired Slade and what Dan's secret human identity will be. Hope it comes soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay if you think you need to improve okay. I liked the look of the changes. Now let it in soon and I hope to see the chapter with the reactions |
![]() ![]() ![]() I say dont delete it, it seems your on the break of writers block for this story so beore you get it stop updating and wait for inspiration... |
![]() ![]() Good story but um I personally like your make nin story witch it's obvious your working on this so i was wondering when the new chapter for that will be updated because it's really good too probably my top five favorite stoties |