Reviews for Renegade |
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Ashaika chapter 27 . 8/14 I love this fic and this Harry. Thanks you |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/29 My Goodness, this was so fabulous. I love the dynamic that Harry and Neville share. |
LordPentragon chapter 26 . 11/19/2023 An excellent story.. |
wolfwind42 chapter 4 . 8/18/2023 “Ron isn't an academic, nor will he ever be.” Ron got near identical grades to Harry for seven years. They both put in the same amount of effort, and were both around the same level of talent. Harry was better in DADA but that was because he had more experience. If Ron isn’t an academic, neither is Harry. “Harry never tries to confront Ron about his jealousy” Ron has never once been jealous of Harry’s fame. Not once in the entire series has he been jealous of Harry because of his fame. He’s been jealous because of his money and when it comes to Hermione. But not once was he shown to be jealous because of Harry’s fame. I know you’re going to point out the incident in Goblet of Fire, but you’d be wrong. That wasn’t a case of jealousy, it was insecurity in their friendship. Take a look at their interactions again. It shows all the signs that Ron thinks Harry left Ron out on purpose. I won’t get into the details since it would take too long, but just read the book again. The only reason people think it was jealousy is because Hermione said so. Even though Hermione has shown repeatedly to not really understand other people’s emotions, especially when it comes to guys. |
HalfBlood Prince chapter 27 . 7/1/2023 Honestly, the narration of the story has been excellent almost every chapter, but it feels like there are too many inconcluusions of character development by constantly changing perspectives, Besides the way Harry changes from someone indifferent with a revolutionary vision to someone unnecessarily sentimental is really disappointing...(I recommend reading this only until Harry returns from the graveyard and ignoring the supposedly fierce fight between Harry and Voldy...) :C |
HalfBlood Prince chapter 9 . 6/30/2023 Honestly, I don't know if I would have liked to see the atrocities they did to that poor Veela, but I definitely always felt that in the canon version it was a waste that they were only used as cheerleaders... :D |
HalfBlood Prince chapter 8 . 6/30/2023 YES! Harry x Fleur... The development of this couple fascinated me :D |
HalfBlood Prince chapter 5 . 6/30/2023 This chapter is so wonderfully eloquent and the idea of seeing it from Lucius' point of view gave it a refined tone... my respects to the Author... :D |
guest chapter 19 . 3/22/2023 The legendary duel happened in 1945 |
mumphie chapter 27 . 3/21/2023 An interesting and intriguing story. Yes, I red it even though you discontinued it. The non-linier style was different, but effective. Except for one particular chapter it was pretty grim. Not sure if Harry is a mixture of old Tom and himself, but am pretty sure he isn't all Tom. Wish you had continued on, would like to know if anyone survived that died last time, and how ole Voldie (I like to call him Morty) and his ideals were conquered, and if they were able to help the British wizarding society. But, c'est la guerre |
Nebresh chapter 27 . 3/7/2023 interesting. |
Jon chapter 27 . 2/28/2023 Interesting ending! you could almost call it over at this point, even though there's a live villain and "the rest" of the story to tell, but it is interesting that over all the POVs, when you finally got to HPs, the arc is basically complete to a "present day" Sure you could continue HP's POV, but a lot of the story has been told through the various other interactions. Who else would you consider? |
Jon chapter 24 . 2/27/2023 I like the A/N where you attempt to explain the levity of this particular prophesy over any other, but I think you did set the scope too narrow. The last one touching an individual being before real life Flamel was alive seems a little farfetched when you have a lot of "Great Individuals" throughout history that it could just as easily be attributable to. I like using the Flamels as a resource of knowledge, though. Living 700 years would probably allow them to have dozens of the largest libraries on earth. |
asd chapter 27 . 2/22/2023 I skipped most of the latter chapters, expecially the ones that happened before harry was even born but great story. Shame it's unfinished. Loved how morally ambiguous he was and loved his motivations and reasons to fight. Also, you have one of the best dumbledore I've read. |
abuduu chapter 3 . 2/21/2023 This is so awesome! finally a morally grey harry that is truly morally grey. Not being evil for the sake of it, not kicking puppies and nothing like most of the angsty shit here. Just straight up sociopath who does what he does for his goals and doesn't go overboard with it as that too would go against his goals. The very definition of BAMF, highly recomended |