Is shallot another name for Moria or am I just making that up?

Damn, I don't know why I read an old story... Anyway, it almost like Aela (or whatever her name is). Though I don't really care about that. Just, spelling please. I can't read if I try to makes sense every sentences.

cant wait for the next chapter.

I read your bucket list story on fan fiction reader app and it was so good I could not put it down I can't wait to read more it's amazing you really pull the reader in

No offense, but it would literally be impossible for her to manage getting back to shore. She would've drowned, no doubt.

Yeah if ace dies sachi and luffy's relationship is going to be screwed for awhile and may never be the same
Sorry it took me so long to catch up, its really good

A beta or editor would go a long way

I love the chapter and Sachi willingly wanting to give her his panties to see his bones! And I really like how you explained his organs still being there even though they aren’t physically there! Really cool!

Love it. can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. can't wait to see more of luffy and Sachi together

Oh my God... She is always in the center of trouble... _

love it. cant wait to see what happen in the next wait to see more ofLuffy and Sachi together.

love it. cant wait to see what happen in the next chapter.

Yeah it was really good... But I am surprised that brook wasn't more emotional to finding out that his crew never left him, after all this time he was never truly alone.

Thatch made me sad :( but I guess that's how it has to go if only he knew what Ace was doing because he was killed! Brook is awesome he's one of my favorite over all characters! Him, Luffy Usopp and Sanji, fifth is Zoro.

That was epic! Though you did spell tired wrong. Buts its still awesome!