Reviews for The Seers' Truth: A Broken Beginning COMPLETE |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story Thoroughly enjoyed reading this story Keep writing as life allows |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha when Snape got Beatrice to stop using the puffer I was like "HELL YEAH!" |
![]() ![]() Punctuation! You need to review the gramatical rules governing commas, question marks, and especially quotation marks. I am too frusterated, trying to figure out what you are trying to say, to continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Crud! Ginny is being tricked by Tom. Edward is pretending to be a gryffindor. Then there is Samara being pulled closer and closer toward draco! Nooo so much evil happening |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omygosh! Samara is definitely the prophesy child and Harry is pushing her away. She'll end up slytherin soon: great chapters i zlovgeeee your story! |
![]() ![]() Brilliant story, maybe a bit American, like the uses of the word 'Mom' and 'Fall' Overall: I'm hooked into the story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh I love it! |
![]() ![]() Ok, I've absolutely loved your story thus far, but I'm starting to get worried that Samara's getting a little Mary-Sueish. It wasn't too bad before but now having her related to Voldemort? I don't know. But I really do like what you have going here and I will definitely continue reading! |
![]() ![]() I'm not sure what I think of two new students who just happen to be coming to Hogwarts for the first time in their 5th year, but I'm only on chapter 2, so I'm sure I'll love it as I keep reading. It's great so far! |
![]() ![]() It sounds awesome! I can't wait to keep reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well ya kept me reading past the first chapter thats good lets see whats up next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "A/N: selections of Voldemort’s speeches were adapted from copies of Adolf Hitler’s speeches—obviously, there were drastic changes made, but some of the ideas were a spring board for Voldemort’s speeches" I thought those sounded familiar! I was going to say exactly how much it sounded like Hitler: so charismatic, but so evil. It was easy to see how he convinced his followers. This chapter was amazing. I found myself holding my breath. You've made Voldemort an astounding villain, his speeches driving and frightening. It takes a lot to get me to actually click the button and review. I also know that this story is completed, even though I haven't finished it yet, I just wanted document this reaction of mine, and congratulate you on a powerful chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the twins |
![]() ![]() ![]() Strange sorting. |