Reviews for Broken Angel
mst3ktoo chapter 1 . 2/4
I'm sorry how can you talk about how she's dealt with the townspeople when you begin the story with her running from a mob? That's pretty inconsistent and we're not even past the first chapter.
acowles02 chapter 8 . 12/30/2023
At this point hermione would be going on about dumbledore and want to be in griffindor
acowles02 chapter 1 . 12/30/2023
Just for tue record, when you wrote about narumi being cornered by anbu, and me tioned viscous pranks, you spelled vicious wrong. Viscous means like a sticky liquid like chololate syrup or honey or molasses or something. Vicious is like mean or violent.
Chiand'r chapter 99 . 11/30/2023
I know I'm posting this really late, but the devil that Riley has to face is Trigon, right? I kinda figured it out when the Mark of Scath was mentioned
kadebrun-slightom chapter 11 . 11/17/2023
Not all humans are evil, we're just complicated.
erozoth chapter 1 . 10/13/2023
The summary works, thanks. I am sure this story is not for me, to much of an "original" for my taste, basically stealing others names but changing everything, click bait fanfic. I also tend to get confused.
Redpanda1224 chapter 19 . 10/10/2023
Lol Kurama is awesome.
GloGang214 chapter 7 . 8/22/2023
Karen Riley lol jk
Jeager2020 chapter 7 . 8/12/2023
Riley's 6 wand cores represent her 6 main lovers. Powdered fairy wing represents the fairylike Luna Lovegood. Basilisk skin represents the Slytherin ice queen Daphne Greengrass. Veela hair represents the quarter veela Fleur Delacour. Now the tricky ones. The one that represents Lucy\Kaede woud be the Augerey feather, as the Augerey is a bird of deathly omen, and Lucy\Kaede is known as the Wind of Death in her franchise. The Phoenix feather I suspect represents Arturia Pendragon. The King of Knights reborn again like a Phoenix rises from the ashes. And lastly the Hippogriff feather representing Katie Bell. This is the one that stumps me as Im not sure what aspect of the Hippogriff matches Katie. They are both noble? They are both half and half of something? Or they both have tempers when their buttons are pushed. I'm not sure.
acowles02 chapter 64 . 8/10/2023
Ahh. The red hot habanero
acowles02 chapter 60 . 8/10/2023
I love kurama in this fic. Almost as much as i like the Goddess of Ice one. This one seems more satire tho
acowles02 chapter 59 . 8/10/2023
Honestly shoulda given her morgan le fay instead of saber. Meger did like her death in fate
acowles02 chapter 55 . 8/10/2023
Ehhhh just make her have the king cough up the third. Thatll sort em out
acowles02 chapter 51 . 8/10/2023
So basically itll be a muggle millitary base.
ShadeslayerX chapter 56 . 5/17/2023
Elfen Lied... not bad. Kaede (Lucy) is not the best to bring in, but at least Mariko has her dad and doesn't die for the perpetuation of that asshat Kakuzawa's schemes. Not to mention Kurama's assistant doesn't become Kakuzawa's rape/torture buddy like in tue anime and manga. Bando we can live without.
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