Reviews for Broken Angel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() how could voldy see something he has not seen in a thousand years when he is not even 100 years old yet |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoy the fact you didnt make voldemort a completely 2D hypocrite and actually gave him morals (the bare minimum) but still i like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry how can you talk about how she's dealt with the townspeople when you begin the story with her running from a mob? That's pretty inconsistent and we're not even past the first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() At this point hermione would be going on about dumbledore and want to be in griffindor |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just for tue record, when you wrote about narumi being cornered by anbu, and me tioned viscous pranks, you spelled vicious wrong. Viscous means like a sticky liquid like chololate syrup or honey or molasses or something. Vicious is like mean or violent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know I'm posting this really late, but the devil that Riley has to face is Trigon, right? I kinda figured it out when the Mark of Scath was mentioned |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not all humans are evil, we're just complicated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The summary works, thanks. I am sure this story is not for me, to much of an "original" for my taste, basically stealing others names but changing everything, click bait fanfic. I also tend to get confused. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol Kurama is awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Karen Riley lol jk |
![]() ![]() ![]() Riley's 6 wand cores represent her 6 main lovers. Powdered fairy wing represents the fairylike Luna Lovegood. Basilisk skin represents the Slytherin ice queen Daphne Greengrass. Veela hair represents the quarter veela Fleur Delacour. Now the tricky ones. The one that represents Lucy\Kaede woud be the Augerey feather, as the Augerey is a bird of deathly omen, and Lucy\Kaede is known as the Wind of Death in her franchise. The Phoenix feather I suspect represents Arturia Pendragon. The King of Knights reborn again like a Phoenix rises from the ashes. And lastly the Hippogriff feather representing Katie Bell. This is the one that stumps me as Im not sure what aspect of the Hippogriff matches Katie. They are both noble? They are both half and half of something? Or they both have tempers when their buttons are pushed. I'm not sure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh. The red hot habanero |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love kurama in this fic. Almost as much as i like the Goddess of Ice one. This one seems more satire tho |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly shoulda given her morgan le fay instead of saber. Meger did like her death in fate |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ehhhh just make her have the king cough up the third. Thatll sort em out |