Reviews for Persephone
archangelbbq chapter 1 . 6/23
I realised it's about time I reread your stories (more like way overdue tbh but tis what i'tis, real life getting in the way again.) It's been so long, even though I remembered loving all of your stories I had forgotten just how exquisitely you write. I adore this kind of fluff, because to me it's too substantial to even be called that. This look into a mature progression of Mai and Naru's relationship is just perfectly illustrated. They're clearly still Mai and Naru, but the growth and development you portray - so effortlessly - is just a joy to read. Thank you again for sharing this lovely story!
WhereDidSweetieGo chapter 1 . 6/12
This was too sweet and I love how subtly the title comes into play!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/10/2016
This was good! I think you did a pretty good job keeping them in character.
Darkness7913 chapter 1 . 8/22/2015
So cute and fluffy.. well as fluffy as a Naru can get.. It's so sweet!
TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
This is fabulous, you are fabulous, and everything is alright in the world.
miss koneko chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
Adorable :) I'm glad I stumbled across your fanfics.
Cepheia chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
I have like no words for the awesomeness so just have these hearts instead: 3 3 3
Love this so much, I kind of wish it was a full-length story, but I feel like it's perfect as a one-shot too, haha
PBMunchkin-Nikkelangelo chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
So much fluff. So cute :)
archangelBBQ chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
BEST PROPOSAL EVER ohmygoodness ugh be still my palpitating heart! (It probably doesn't help that I'm listening to this sooo romantic sweeping orchestral music, haha.)

This is pretty amazing. I don't really know where to begin because I just adore every word. Everything about this is just ... perfect. The conversations between them are really the heart and soul of this and I don't know how you manage to craft such compelling dialogue. It's so wonderfully and intricately written. I just love it.

"I merely stacked the options in my favor." (Bless you, Naru-chan.)
chikasora chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
I'm drowning...in fluffiness...I love it though! XD
Great story! Maybe a sequel? ;)
Naruisawesome chapter 1 . 6/12/2015
*squeals* Soooo cute! I love it! :D
chadtayor020 chapter 1 . 6/12/2015
Pretty fluffy.
SubtleKnife7810 chapter 1 . 6/12/2015
Loved It! Would be nice to have a sequel xD