Reviews for Pokémon: Bonds and Whispers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That moment when Ghetsis continues to organize bad things to happen to pokemon around N through "human" hands. And intentionally sought out only damaged Pokemon to play with him as a child. |
![]() ![]() Georgia is A Dragon Buster she will challenge anyone who has a Dragon Type. Ash has a Gible(since this a Fanfic fully evolve it). He could also trade his Tauros for a Druddigon or Shiny Axew or Shiny Deino. He literally has 30 Tauros but the only one that battles is the leader the one Brock gave him. Since Iris is not his companion you can let him catch a Dragonite in advance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish this Ash could atleast show the experience, maturity and dignity of someone who travel and compete on 4 different region. He was okayish at best here and tbh could be better (experience wise) he is more often than not eclipsed by trainer who just started their journey. Sure they have talents but Ash have experience yet his performance is a bit pitiful for a guy who went and manage to enter 4 pokemon leagues (meaning fought and defeat atleast 2 dozen plus gym leaders and a lots of lot of trainers). The only consolation i found so far is the fact that he atleast have SOME of the og's Creativy other than that meh could be better. Anyways, Thanks for the chapter and hope this gets update soon! P.s I'm not asking for him to be op and curbstomp his opponents but he should atleast show the opponents having hard time fighting him instead of struggling to fight back against newbies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been searching for a unique reboot unova fic for awhile and your fic caught my attention. One, new companion meaning newer adventures. Two, rare ship meaning a more unique romance compared to the overused ash/serena or ash/dawn. Both concept just made it caught me with a Line, Hook and a Sinker(?) so gonna read it now! Also. Tbh, the last time i totally immersed on watching pokemon was back during Diamond and Pearl and that was years ago so couldn't really recall much. Tried watching BW but got discourage cause of the bad rep it earns. XY was nice but the lingering effect of BW cause me to not watch all of its episode and that's not talking about the SM's terrible animation style. I just couldn't bring myself to watch pokemon anime any time soon so i just make do with some unique fics like yours so hopefully this won't be disappointing. Anyways, thanks for the chapter and hope for more! |
![]() ![]() This is a great story I hope you continue it as for the pokemon Ash should capture in unova besides canon I would suggest Litwick, Zorua, Deino, Golett, Sawk, Venipede, Axew, Klink, Cubchoo, Drillbur, Cryoganal, Deerling, Mienfoo, and/or Bouffalant but that's just me. Keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() This is quite an interesting and enjoyable AU of the B/W series. I love that you have carried over the skilled Ash from D/P over to this tale rather than what canon did. It has also been a treat to see a retelling of the game storyline, which remains one of my favorites from the games. Having Ash take part in that plot? Wonderful! I do not know if you ever plan on returning to this tale, but I would like to thank you for the great story that you have written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to update this story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait shouldn't the stone be Black. |
![]() ![]() Can't blame Team Plasma they're evil and all but there is truth in their words all the Evil organizations use and force pokemons for their gain, many trainers do the same Damian and Paul are examples along with every other abusive trainer in the world. Ash also does it every time he goes to a new region he leave the previous team behind taking only Pikachu making it look like he don't care about other pokemons aside from Pikachu, what about the promise with Pidgot? How many years have passed those Pokemons are clearly better by staying away from Ash who leaves them behind every single time even though they could be very helpful in each new region he goes to. |
![]() ![]() Snivy ahould have been defeated by a single attack. I really hope this isn't like the anime where Pikachu loses to a lvl 5 Snivy |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is great WAY MORE BETTER than the original and I like both serious Team Rocket & goofy Team Rocket But I'm not sure if im late for suggesting for ash's unova team but this is his team (On hand) 1) Pikachu (obviously) 2) Dewott (Apparently there's a rumor that ash's oshawott was supposed to evolve at some point in the series but didn't and I think it fits ash really well and it stays as dewott because I don't think samurott fits ash well nor the pokemon) 3) Braviary (it's me or braviary is 1000 times better than unfezant because its design scream ash to me and it does well in battle unlike the peace of crap ash got in the original version) 4) Superior (Snivy has alot of potential in her so I don't get it why the writer's dont fully evolved snivy and it could have a rivalry with Charon Superior but seeing a Superior useing attract will be hilarious ) 5) Pignite (well it use to be ash's ace in unova so why not) 6) Haxorus (well ash never own a dragon type pokemon before other than Gible and later noivern and goodra but for Haxorus I don't know it could be a power house and ash can win so many battles with this pokémon) (Rotation) 1) Krookodile (well it is ash's ace in unova) 2) Scrafty (it has the potential to evolve so why not) 3) Scolipede (it is fast so it fits into ash's arsenal) 4) Gigalith (well remember the episode were Bianca and Professor Juniper Traded both of their pokémon well instead of Juniper it will be ash after both ash and bianca traded both of their pokémon they decided they want there pokémon back because of the bond they had with there pokémon) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pikachu got tagged by a rookie. Shame on both of them |
![]() ![]() ![]() I saw this chapter posted a while ago, but it's been so long that I felt like I had to read the story over again to understand everything. I'm happy to say that I still love what you're doing, so keep it up, even if it takes you a while to get around to writing. |
![]() ![]() i really like this story and hope you update it again soon :) |