Reviews for Full Fathom Five |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This makes no sense. Its a really long ride to the stormlands for the moat we already had to deal with Jons month long side quest to castle black on a who am i journey so he wasnt there to help rob when the whole war thing kicked off and Now Jon fucked off on another month long aide quest with the Reeds while Robb rides all the way down to the storm lands again without Jon. Thats dumb for two reasons one the only reason anybody took Robb seriously at all in cannon was his victories in the battle of the whispering woods and his success at the golden tooth this Rob hasn’t done anything but march an army to the moat where they have apparently rotted for two months. Do have have any clue how much food and other supplies it takes to care for a 2 thousand man army, marching an army to leave then sit at an abandoned fort for 2 months is retarded. If he was going to be an idiot he should have just waited to call his banners and negotiated with Renly from winterfell. Jon could have left for 6 months or whatever on his who am I journey while Robb did a fuck ton of nothing. This version of Robb is much stupider then his cannon counterpart. His book version had already bent the lannisters over and captured Jamie bu this point. Why would anyone negotiate with a boy king that hasn’t accomplished anything yet. In cannon nobody had any respect for Rob before he saw battle not even his own men. They all just rightfully concidered him a green boy |
![]() ![]() ![]() This went from annoying to just plain stupid; they spend 6 months at the neck waiting for the war to start while Catlyn made the month long journey to the stormlands now Robb wants to hold off the war to go give the same demands in person that his mother gave? Why send her to begin with and why would he take Ramsey? Lord Bolton in cannon made sense because he was a vetren war commander and experienced lord even though he was always described as creepy but Ramsey is not experienced at all and just creepy without the good parts while Robb admitted he’d never met him. Seems stupid. Also really hope this isn’t a Sandor/Sansa pairing. Hes like 50 and shes 14 only pedofiles enjoy that pairing |
![]() ![]() ![]() And why would you gift longclaw to Sam? Hes not a good swordsman or even a decent swordsman, he’s terrible with a sword. Its a waste of a good sword |
![]() ![]() ![]() The timeline for this is screwy as hell. They havent even left Winterfell yet and Renly is already married Margery. In cannon that didnt happen till after the battle of the whispering woods? And how the hell is Catlyn supposed to get from winterfell to the raech; thts like a month worth of travel and would take her ether the crownlands or the westerlands? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Robb as a character but I dont think I can ever enjoy a Robb/Danny pairing for the sole reason of nobody wants to see a ginger Targaryen. Would much Rather see Jon/Sanny and Rob/Margery |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't think this conversation works out. Mance acting like he told them all would certainly fit his characterif he ever did. He did not. He was planning to attack the wall and now holds it against everyone that they weren't exactly inviting him and his people in. Feels a little weird. 2 Kings just accepting that, having the maturity to just accept that, yet making empty threats and childish comments is kinda confusing too. If I'm not mistaken, you wanted to try and prevent them from being these unrealistic barely men who would just be instantly good at everything. Seeing as they have witnessed a lot by now though, I'd say them making mistakes every 2 seconds is suddenly doing the opposite. Might be wrong though. See ya xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is as good as any theory, truly. I myself believe Aegon to be Mopatis and Serras son (up to air if Varys and Serra are Blackfyres) what with that statue of young Mopatis looking suspiciously like Aegon. But Martin has a habit of leading us into false directions. For all we know, Mopatis could just be related the boy in a different matter (like generations and his face just randomly looks similar). You've done something great here, my respect xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I get that Jon wants to keep it a secret, yes it's strategically sound, but... and that's a major but, Robb being declared king complicates this a lot. Jon acting like everything is alright is kinda strange, because he should at least be shocked, if not outright worried, just like Catelyn should be. |
![]() ![]() Was the slow pace of the North so that Robb could muster the whole strength of the North, unlike canon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Throwing the old Aegon spanner into the works? Should be interesting. |
![]() ![]() Robb/Dany sind großartig Margaery/Jon passen kein bißchen zusammen. |
![]() ![]() I like how you included book lore and even tinfoil theories into the story. However, I wish you would have tied up some of the loose ends instead of saying that we (the readers) could just “fill in the blanks”. It seems like you just got burnt out at the end and rushed things without any explanations. You killed characters “off screen” for what, convenience? The glass candle was a big waste of time, not only for you to write, but for us to read. I recently finished your story Before the Dawn. There were a lot of loose ends in that one as well. I thought it was because you haven’t written the sequel yet. Unfortunately it just seems to be a pattern of you not knowing how to write an ending for your stories. You have great ideas and I thoroughly enjoy reading your stories, but please focus your talent and don’t leave us with mediocre endings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a very good story, a little rushed in the battles and romances, but still very good |
![]() ![]() You dod not sat if Bran and the "C of the F " redid the binding spells in the pit ? What about the Wall.? |
![]() ![]() Bron or Podrick ? |