|Reviews for Alternative end of Hunter (last episode of Season 6)|
| Reader chapter 7 . 9/9/2015
Hmm... not sure what to think with the sharing of your notes, I'm a bit confused. I hope you plan to continue writing.
That being said, my sister texted me to say there are Hunter reruns on MeTv.
| Reader chapter 6 . 8/20/2015
I was about to go to bed and I got a great surprise (squealing like a little schoolgirl).
Thank you for the update and you addressed what they were feeling as they missed being together. I can only imagine what you have on store for them...
| Reader chapter 5 . 7/28/2015
Wow. Somebody needed a timeout. Not sure if McCall leaving is a good thing, but she needed to regroup while Hunter needed a wake-up call. I can't wait to see where this is going.
| TGM5657 chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
I appreciate that you spend time to read my story. It's the best reward to me. Writing is never my favorite thing, but Hunter is my favorite show. In fact, I just started to learn writing after Syntax6 generously offered help. English is not native language and I didn't know the most basic stuff of fiction writing (regardless language) even a few months ago. Now I got some idea. I am happy that at least two of you noticed the difference between the first version and this one. The improvement is all because of Syntax6! After her correction, I put more plots in, hopefully, I didn't make the story worse than it should be.
I don't know how to answer the review from reader or guest by message. I put the answer here temporary. Syntax6's work are in her website. You can easily Google it by "Fanfiction by syntax6".
| JoselynRae chapter 4 . 7/20/2015
This is much improved over the original version; looks like a lot of work has been put into it.
What a scary ordeal to live through! I'm glad Hunter is on the mend, and of course I love that he and McCall are figuring out a relationship together. Recalling McCall's flower bill comment from the pilot was a nice throwback.
| reader chapter 2 . 7/20/2015
Such a brilliant way to handle Hunter's mobster background!
| syntax6 fan chapter 4 . 7/19/2015
on a separate note, do you know where syntax6 went and why all the Hunter stories were pulled?
| Reader chapter 4 . 7/19/2015
OMG! so much going on that I had to red this twice! Looking forward to seeing how this develops.
| Kat chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
hey like the story and I just have a question. I write fanfic also but never online I'm too scared. My endings kinda fall flat. I'd like to know how you make these so true to the characters? It's like I can picture it in my head I'd love to be able to go that in my stories thanks
| Barbara Lambert chapter 3 . 7/5/2015
Great story/looking forward to more.
| Reader chapter 3 . 6/28/2015
I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this. I've often thought of what he would do if he walked away from the force to be with her.
| Reader chapter 2 . 6/22/2015
now if only Mama Hunter had knocked some sense into her boy ...
| Snowgirl01 chapter 2 . 6/22/2015
Please post more
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
This version is so much better than your first one. Can not wait for the next chapter...
| Reader chapter 1 . 6/14/2015
that was a throwback - looking at a newspaper for a theater and show times :-)