Reviews for Pirates on Tenrou Island
P-Dox-Zee chapter 7 . 8/22
1: happy doesnt correct people when they call him a talking cat.
2. Natsu wld never imitate some couple or something
3. Zoro doesnt stutter man, even when surprised. C'mon
Otomos the Crazy Peridot chapter 15 . 6/14/2016
Um...I hope Garp's in the sequel, because you kinda brought him into this, and forgot to follow it up.
Neko Sakaki chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
May I also copy this story
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 15 . 2/8/2016
Excellent part one!
The Destinesia Girl chapter 12 . 2/2/2016
UH, Luffy has haki!
Meteor Gin chapter 2 . 1/19/2016
? What was that crap speach about all of the sudden? You'd think he saw a giant chunk of meat...
sara chapter 2 . 12/30/2015
oh! i'm french and i don't speak english! your chapter is very good! it's difficult for me a lesen but i understand your story! sorry for my english!
Guest chapter 5 . 10/15/2015
Ten thousand ships... Really? That sound like something Usopp would say. Ten thousand people sure kinda overkill but sure, ten thousand ships on the hand each carrying at minimum around 30 people and max around 1000 is just ridiculous.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/15/2015
Now I know in One Piece the government is bad but I think you have pirates and marines mixed up. Pirates don't have a duty to do anything the straw hats just help people because they want to, that whole speech was kinda screwy
maximotheone chapter 2 . 9/7/2015
ok heres the thing i stopped reading this after this point and its not for any reason other than you got luffy dead wrong. he is not a hero he's not in it to save people he's a pirate he woulden't go to the island to save some one he'd go because its an island and its mysterious. luffys actions have never been driven to just save someone he's never met he fights because someone pissed him off not because their evil. not saying its bad but i like luffy as a character so this is a deal breaker
wordletsbestfan chapter 15 . 8/29/2015
yayyyyyyy DOOOOO ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT! :)
Rune Saint chapter 8 . 8/27/2015
I belive you've depowered Luffy why too much, also Luffy doesn't have fear at least not for himself, for his crew yes, not for himself though.
Winter Anime Fan chapter 1 . 8/22/2015
Brook: You can have my meat.
Me: Dirty thoughts, dirty, dirty thoughts.
LoveGlutton chapter 2 . 8/8/2015
I feel like it would be more his decision then the groups philosophy
Matt chapter 15 . 7/15/2015
Isn't this part of your other story?
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