Reviews for The Past Is Back
Razeus1 chapter 6 . 5/29
I'd say the shock of finding that Bella was his mate would be profound enough to allow the merging of his 2 personas.
It would be an accurate description to address him as Major Jasper Whitlock (I hate when he takes on someone else's name) as his dominant side is the Major.

This story feels more like an outline to writing the full story, sorry to say.
I do enjoy the idea(s) and I like that you're giving Jasper his balls back from mAlice.
I never understood how he could be subservient to Carlisle, Jasper is an Alpha personality..
Missysue32 chapter 12 . 3/10
I LOVED this story, it was AWESOME!
jeoliverio chapter 12 . 4/27/2017
This was a short and good story
marissamtz000 chapter 12 . 4/20/2017
Lmao that was hilarious. Love it. Was that the last chapter or is there more?
Lunar Stag chapter 8 . 10/27/2016
Hmmm, I'm really liking it so far! good job. I say more Bella and Jasper/Major time. Mabe some heated romance? definetely a fight between Carlise, alice, edward, Victoria?, mystery woman, and on the other side, Major, bella, esme, alistair, peter, charlotte, and mabe a couple other allies on both sides.

3 lovin it, plz update soon.

Cacau Black chapter 2 . 10/21/2016
1WhoLoves2ReadAlot chapter 12 . 9/18/2016
Awesome story, so far! Love it!
Ealasaid Una chapter 10 . 9/1/2016
will reneemse be safe?
Ealasaid Una chapter 9 . 9/1/2016
no nessie?
Ealasaid Una chapter 3 . 9/1/2016
is she in danger?
GeezerWench chapter 12 . 8/24/2016
I like that keeping Edward's head as a trophy.

Kicked all the asses!
GeezerWench chapter 11 . 8/24/2016
Volturi happened to be in town. How convenient!
GeezerWench chapter 10 . 8/24/2016
Now a go?

I hope that house burns fast.
GeezerWench chapter 9 . 8/24/2016
Yeah. Burn that house down!
GeezerWench chapter 7 . 8/24/2016
Carlisle made them forget all about it.

Seems to me they need to get the hell out of Dodge!
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