Man that Charlie chapter and now this with Elise and her sister made a grown man cry.

you are 100% right there is not a single American in the world who will acknowledge that fact and as an American I feeled called out for it and this is my response we do war better and faster than anyone else there is not a single other country in the world that isn't just prepared but ready to fight a three front war at any given time hell most countries can't even fight a two front war but it is American military policy to be capable of fighting that kind of war it may of been 80 years since the rest of world went insane again and we had to put down your war again seeing as we have literally all of your freedoms twice unless you belong to Germany Russian Japan and or any of the smaller countries that used to be part of the ottoman empire then the only you aren't flying a nation flag is thanks to dumbass Japanese admiral who thought pissing off the US was a smart thing to do like seriously and then they jut so happened to choose the one morning next to none of our major naval power was in the harbor absolutely genius I tell you but yeah we love being insane because deciding the best way to fight is to hide in a hole then charge the enemy across open fields straight into machine gun fire but wait there's more then making the completely sane decision to force a single country that was not even the first country of the losing side to declare was to pay for everyone's involvement when the country that actually started the whole thing Serbia I'm looking at you got off scot free because they were on the winning side yes that all of that European and African and Asian stuff seems very sane doesn't it fight your own goddamm wars for once instead of crying to us whenever y'all pop off cause it is always one of y'all that starts this shit what world war has been fought in America beside 1 15 minute firefight in Alaska when Japan thought they had a chance of taking that again that whole operation only lasted 15 minutes before every jap was dead or in custody but we are the insane ones no we are prepared for world war 3 and guess where it won't start in North or south America guess where it will start in Europe or Eurasia as the area around Russia is sometimes called as most of it is technically in Asia but most of the people in Russia mostly live the European part of the country as it is warmer but again back to my point we may be insane but at least we don't hold our craziness inside and pretend to be civilized while y'all do then end up murdering let's see rough death count of ww2 was about 72 million dead not counting wounded with about 400 thousand of that number being American soldiers 400 thousand out of 72 million dead is ours but we are the insane ones at we only had to fight ourselves once y'all have done it twice and still aren't sick of it yet but we are the insane ones y'all are barbaric monsters that need only the smallest of hint of war to abandon all your so called civilized ways to murder as many of yourselfs as you can and even that isn't enough for y'all you also want us to die along side you this fight in Ukraine I read on the internet constantly why hasn't America done this or that or a thousand other things because it isn't our fight why hasn't Germany invaded Russian or Britain or France or Spain huh what about them why are we the ones who are expected to die in y'alls wars but then get called insane for fighting for y'all pieces of fucking ungrateful shit how many people from my country has died fighting in wars they had no business being in because y'all can't fucking handle a wet paper bag for a fucking target you probably didn't think about your words when writing them but you just disrespected every single countryman of mine that has died in y'alls wars ww1 and ww2 I will admit with ww2 we would have gotten involved sooner or later but this was not the case in ww1 British intelligence if there actually was ever a thing intercepted a message from Germany to Mexico in 1915 asking Mexico to invade America here's the kicker British Intel didn't show it to our current president at the time Wilson I believe until 1917 when it showed they were going to lose the war by the end if that year suddenly we are involved giving more and more and sending troops and boom wars overs congrats y'all won all you needed to do was use an old outdated message to piss off America y'all lost then you got the help you desperately needed all the dead Americans then for what your comfort only to piss on the lovers instead of being honorable in victory you were vindictive in it in my opinion ww1 and ww2 were the same war just with a 20 year break for resource and training needs it has happened in ancient times some breaks between battle in ancient wars lasted years that's how you could see a 100 year war like what has happened in the past 100 years of constant heavy fighting no country has ever existed with the resources and personnel for such a thing how did I get to this specific topic I am not sure maybe it's my Amer

I always come back to this story and reread it and fall in love with it all over again. I honestly cannot see the Indominous Rex as the Indominous Rex. I just see Elise now. I adore how you wrote this story and characters and just how much you developed and brought to life Elise. She is one of my favorites. Your story has that excellent balance of feels good and thriller themes in it. I always come back and just enjoy myself again reading this. Thank you. Thank you for making this story. I hope that wherever you are, you are living happily and live a good life. Thank you.

I figured I’d read this one through again since I am rewatching all the Jurrasic Park movies again. I do have to say that I truly do hope that you come back to finish this. I remember reading every single chapter as you released them back in 2015 on Wattpad. It was my favorite story honestly. It gives such a great personality to all the characters showed and touches on so many real life problems. It was truly amazing to see the story play out. I honestly don’t know what happened to you, and I wish you well. Even if you don’t ever finish this amazing story, I want to thank you for entertaining me and for gifting this tale to every JP enjoyer.

God I love this story so much! I really wish it would continue.

Hey, that one Guest who's frustrated with the story, I gotta say I agree. There's a lot of potential here given up for fluff and it doesn't hold up to the test of time. If anything, I urge you to maybe post your own writing based on it or even an original idea. Doesn't look like Skulls is coming back any time soon, despite her message about just being busy and planning to return.

"Bridges' mother named him Daemon because she was ill like him, and incredibly religious"

- I must admit, I thought that whoever chose his name had simply misspelled 'Damon' and accidentally added an 'e'. :)

...I always thought that Romeo & Juliet was supposed to be a cautionary tale about the importance of communication, and the dangers inherent of a] inadequate communication and b] acting like impulsive idiots with unsubstantiated information?

The contrast between Bridges' and Sobek's perceptions of their time together in this chapter is hilarious! :D Bridges is soooo full of himself, while Sobek just wishes he would shut the f- up already - I love it! *hugs*

Will Elise sister be famous too or no?

I was wondering will Elise’s sister be famous or is is just Elise?

Can’t wait for more

this story frustrates me a lot. so many good ideas and interesting characters and barely anything is done with it besides fluff. you basically established an entire universe of terrible implacations (one being the fact that elise is literally someone else's property and that they're exploiting a little girl, even if its 'justified') and this is the one chapter where it almost becomes a *story*. and i hate that, because this is easily the best chapter in the novel, and you actually used elise's and bridge's dynamic beautifully unlike the rest of the story where hes a tryhard (borderline ableist tbh) mustache twirling villian. there's stakes, there's things actually happening, there's real chemistry.

and then it just kinda...crumbles, after that. you get a glimpse of an actually interesting world, after 60 chapters of it being teased, and then it's over soon after. despite all of its flaws i lowkey mourn for the potential this story had, the story it could've told if things were handled differently. and despite all of that, i sometimes almost find myself drawn into its world, only to realize how flawed and unfinished it is. i couldn't will myself to reread it if i wanted to, its just too depressing.

i apologize for how dramatic this sounds, i know its literally just jurassic park fanfiction, but i come back to this story too often. ive gotten into a habit of thinking of how i would change things if i was the one writing it, and its led me to wanting to write in the first place. i cant help but thank you, genuinely. judging by an older review, if its to be believed, you still have interest in finishing this story (at least i *imagine* you do, consider by that point it was already years since the last update...).

i hope i can forget about this story until then. its just depressing to think about how much couldve been done with this universe, and its been silent for years. really, i just hope you're alright. if you do finish this story one day, i'll come back and read it. finish it how you want, when you want, if you want. wishing you the best

$& #ING HUMAN!

this story kinda mid ngl but this chapter is fucking wild to me. youve established that dinosaurs are sentient, intelligent creatures and you spend like half this chapter making elise just cap one of her own basically. and for like, no reason? granted shes killed like actual people before but this time she just willingly chose to fuck up her own kind lmaoo

hello! just wanted to let you know that i've saved every chapter of this fic to the internet archive's wayback machine, in case anything happens to the domain you're hosting it on. every time i read this story, i fall in love with its world all over again. can't let that be lost to the internet because of something like the site going down, eh?