God I hate how mc allows absolutely everyone to just completely walk all over him. He never even tries to make anyone see that hes not perfect, he just accepts all their criticism and blames himself. Like damn, grow a fucking spine. 99 percent of his group wouldve been dead by this point and yet hes blamed for literally everything that goes wrong, he even blames himself! How could he have possibly saved Oolacile? They literally met Dusk less than a week ago and Artorias is already far gone by the point you go back in time, yet somehow hes being blamed for the damn city’s fall? Fuck i just want mc to grow a damn spine. Rant over

Honestly? Great story I like this one WAYY more than that other one with high reviews with the same ish concept. Garrett actually isn’t an ass for no reason at all. He’s had ALOT on his plate. And honestly it’s kind of the home stretch. Seath, Bed of Chaos, Oolacile, Gwyn. Nito is irrelevant now and it’s mostly just character interactions now. At MOST I’d say like less than 10 chapters TOTAL. Unless you want Garett to go to the ringed city but why? Ya know? I assume Oscar or solaire is gonna burn and Garrett has a happy ever after after he rescues dusk and takes her to the present. OR dusk dies, Garett get SUPER depressed and burns while everyone is saved but melancholy. Who knows! I’m sure you have little interest/burnout for this story now. But genuinely a good read. To myself the pacing felt just about right and there were few boring moment's. I’m going to save this and if you ever update again just know you’ll have at least one guy who’ll be drop everything to read another chapter! Take care

This story is dropped, author said it himself on . Someone ask if this and To Teach A Zero will get updated the author says "I don't think so" or something along the line.

And we never had a new chapter

Binge read this, and I'm loving it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

most banal fanfictions I've ever read as if it were a compilation of other fics

a great story that haven't been update in 2 years now... I wish it had completed itself so I could see the end of it but I guess great things can sometimes disappoint

sad that this seems to be the end of the story. So much character development waiting to happen... sadge.

Still loved it though, every word.

again. paradox. kinda pissed garret hasn't realized either. but he's also under a lot of pressure so that can be forgiven. the others, not so much.

not gonna lie, this chapter pissed me off for a plethora of reasons. The writing is excellent and I love the story, but the fact that nobody has ever really pondered Garret's foresight abilities infuriates me.

Regarding Dusk, Garret warning her would have probably created a paradox in which the changes to the timeline ensured Garret wouldn't have been able to warn Dusk in the first place. Garret COULDN'T save Oolacile, because saving it would have ensured he wouldn't be in a position TO save it. So being pissed at him for not causing a massive paradox feels stupid.

Also, dude is literally 19 years old and has to bear the weight of the literal fucking world, while resigning himself to death so the other people around him can live. The youngest member of this group has to sacrifice his life and nobody has really considered that either. Not to mention that Garret has effectively lost his entire family and life, and won't even live long enough to make a new one. He has nothing to live for or die for anymore except for these people he has surrounded himself with.

And ALSO, most of these fuckers would have died anyways had Garret not decided to fight fate. Dude could have ran with the script and not bothered changing anything, but he decided to go out of his way and save so many people. And still, they don't recognize that by this point.

I just finished this chapter, so maybe the others will realize some of this later. but if they don't imma be a little bit pissed off at their idiocy.

Still an absolutely awesome story tho, I just feel like my boy Garret is getting too much hate from his party.

яt was great reading this story
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hope to see continue one day

I dont necessarily agree with all the drama going on rn, but I'm glad some of it has come to a sort of conclusion. The scene between dusk and garret was

Where does it say it has been discontinued? Last time this was updated was like a years length before another chapter was added but still. I mean yeah I can see it being dropped but is the a explicit confirmation?

Shame that it ended with discontinue and not a complete. Great dark souls fanfic.

Just finished the last chapter. This was a wonderful read