Reviews for The Legacy of Sparta
arxdhya chapter 4 . 6/8/2023
nice copy paste from another author
jujp chapter 4 . 11/26/2021
Great story. I checked this out after CBF's story suggestion. Hope you continue this story at some point. Its really entertaining and well written. Thank you for the story and good luck!
Yeet chapter 1 . 9/10/2021
majikss chapter 1 . 8/3/2021
how do you spell father wrong idiot
Billy Bob Joe 23 chapter 4 . 4/30/2021
How are you doing my dude?
XXIVA chapter 4 . 2/7/2021
100% one of the best and most interestingly descriptive writing styles I've seen from a fanfic. Huge fan of it too :D

makes me feel really, really immersed in the story without having too much detail that would cause it to feel stagnant or stale.

Found your story from the previous account (the last Spartan) and it got me hooked straight away. It's a real shame how people have to shame you for your writing - though if you ask me, I wouldn't know what there is for them to shame you about. But I'm glad your back on this account, and I hope you continue to upload whenever you can!
Guest chapter 4 . 12/29/2020
Please come back and update this! It's a very well written story!
Zayden-B chapter 2 . 11/21/2019
Bro really good fanfic please keep updating
I’ve already read the last spartan and I noticed that you often say weird things when it comes to height. For example in this chapter 5’8 is not short it’s fairly tall for a girl and really tall for a 14-15 year old girl I think since it’s about 175 cm I think
UtopiaofAvalon chapter 1 . 10/6/2019
I hope you’re okay, I reread your old story from your old penname and I realized that I hadn’t seen it since back in 2016, when I got into fanfiction. I’m glad that you wrote that and kept it up at least, i mean, it was the first fanfiction that I ever read.
IAmCover chapter 1 . 7/16/2019
Damn, I was hoping to read more after reading th first 19 chapters of the original, your story will be missed
Blast of the past chapter 4 . 4/13/2019
Love the story! Hoping for an update!
Chad chapter 4 . 4/4/2019
Please please please update this story I beg of you!
Do not let it die out!
Nimst chapter 4 . 2/26/2019
A realy good story, hope you update again, love your Percy/Zoe.
Joker Army chapter 4 . 2/5/2019
Where’s the rest?! What happened? I just read 21 chapters and I want more where’s the rest?!
Guest chapter 4 . 2/4/2019
Can u upload chap 20/21 of The Last Sparta on this at least
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