Reviews for The Legacy of Sparta |
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![]() ![]() Who tf couldn’t connect the dots… |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice copy paste from another author |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I checked this out after CBF's story suggestion. Hope you continue this story at some point. Its really entertaining and well written. Thank you for the story and good luck! |
![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() how do you spell father wrong idiot |
![]() ![]() ![]() How are you doing my dude? |
![]() ![]() ![]() 100% one of the best and most interestingly descriptive writing styles I've seen from a fanfic. Huge fan of it too :D makes me feel really, really immersed in the story without having too much detail that would cause it to feel stagnant or stale. Found your story from the previous account (the last Spartan) and it got me hooked straight away. It's a real shame how people have to shame you for your writing - though if you ask me, I wouldn't know what there is for them to shame you about. But I'm glad your back on this account, and I hope you continue to upload whenever you can! |
![]() ![]() Please come back and update this! It's a very well written story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro really good fanfic please keep updating I’ve already read the last spartan and I noticed that you often say weird things when it comes to height. For example in this chapter 5’8 is not short it’s fairly tall for a girl and really tall for a 14-15 year old girl I think since it’s about 175 cm I think |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you’re okay, I reread your old story from your old penname and I realized that I hadn’t seen it since back in 2016, when I got into fanfiction. I’m glad that you wrote that and kept it up at least, i mean, it was the first fanfiction that I ever read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, I was hoping to read more after reading th first 19 chapters of the original, your story will be missed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story! Hoping for an update! |
![]() ![]() Please please please update this story I beg of you! Do not let it die out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A realy good story, hope you update again, love your Percy/Zoe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where’s the rest?! What happened? I just read 21 chapters and I want more where’s the rest?! |