|Reviews for Star Trek: A Lesson In Love|
| Bryson chapter 5 . 3/14/2003
You know, I don't like to give bad comments to a story I'm liking, but geez man.
I'm reading this and I'm seeing you confusing characters (namely Racheal and Vanessa). You're talking about one, but you put in the other's name. Re-read the chapter for yourself and see my point.
Clean it up, and don't make the same mistake in the final chapter, which seems will be an interesting ending.
| Kathy chapter 4 . 2/9/2003
Just great! Go on with that. :-)
| Kathy chapter 3 . 1/29/2003
*g* that goes an interesting way... hope youll continue soon
| Bryson chapter 2 . 1/25/2003
You have a total of two reviewers but have four reviews now. I'm giving you an order to post more. Its not that I'm hooked but if you want more readers and reviews then you have to post new chapters more often.
| kathy chapter 2 . 1/19/2003
c'mon finish it! I want to know what happens!
| Bryson chapter 1 . 12/28/2002
You should really post the next chapter. Waiting periods suck.
| Kathy chapter 1 . 12/26/2002
Hmmm I like it. Actually I thought often about to write a story like this myself. Looking for the next part... :-)