Reviews for Avenging Angel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I likes that Mr. Schue took her side, so to speak, bit I don't want to get my hopes up. It wouldn't be the fist story I read where something happens, he takes their side and then changes it after something else happens |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is everyone forget that's its Rachel house ? Stop asking permission to Shelby ! Its Rachel's ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And here again with the money... how in earth Sue could afford all of her "toys" beside having a summer house to take care of ? Seriously that put such a damper in the story for me. Its way too much and too ideal to be more that just cringy. Too bad because, like usual, the rest of the plot is not bad. I like the interaction between Rachel and Fran especially. I hope there will be more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Exactly what i thought... I don't like the referencing about Rachel's house as Shelby's. Its not her house, its Rachel's. Besides, its way too much for a teenage romance. No parents take them thats seriously to the point on buying that much. Other than that, i like your story but seriously, too much money had been spent on both home. It made me cringe at the beginning of the story and here... no seriously that unrealistic, even with doting parents... a studio, really ? They should just buy a home for everyone with the way they set everything for everyone, including the adult. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok thats... no seriously. If just being appart from each other at night is enough for them to fall appart and act like they have been separated during months then i am sorry but they need help. They are co-dependant in a way so toxic thats not something a mother should indulged in. Seriously, thats not cute, thats dangerous. I am pretty sure you will push to share home with Judy half the week and the other half with Shelby and that indulging them... i hate this and thats bad because i like lot of things despite a lot of rush on some plot and mistakes here and there :/ I hope i am wrong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am sorry but i found their reaction way too much. They so overreacted that become cringe seriously. They are still dating, be able to see each other all the time, they are appart only at night and thats too much ? Please. And Quinn could, i don't know, try to see her mother's effort ? I mean, she wanted her mother more in her life, she has it, and ok she can be warry of her being there for good, i would be too, but she just didn't even try anything. Its like she punishes her for trying to be her mother. And Shelby's reaction is not better. Crying ? And trying to say to another mother how wrong she is ? Because she want to spent time with her daugther ? When Shelby has been a mother since only a few months ? Sorry but its wrong on so many level. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still don't understand the change you put Will through. I mean, he start by listening to Rachel and protecting her from Finn to becoming a jerk as big as Finn. Why ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am curious to know what happen with her dad. Is he regretting leaving her ? He must. I mean, he raised her and loved her. If she missed him that means he loved her and show her. So, that would make no sens to not missed her. I hope we will have some news at some point, when he get over the depression who obviously put him in this path. Depression can make you do thing you will never think to do other way. You don't think clearly and i would love to know what he was thinking when all happened. I am glad Shelby is bought in, i can't wait to read whats in store for her and Rachel ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why the need to buy so much stuff for each ? I mean, each one of the gift are very expensive and yet, its not enough they bought more ? Even Puck buy multiple expensive gift, that make no sense to me. I guess its how it is with rich people, but i still found it way too much. One or maybe two well thought gift should be enough. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this so far and I hope there is more to this and your other stories. |
![]() ![]() I glad your giving this story an ending it deserves. I so hope the girls get some justice, and more support from their peers. Awesome update, stay safe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it thanks glad your back stay safe and well. |
![]() ![]() Thank you! I've been waiting forever for this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m so happy your back , I can’t wait to finish the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't speak much English but I love what you write and I can't wait to see the rest of your story. |