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Omggg pls comw back I loved this

This is so cute. I can’t wait to see what happens next.

I love the ending of this chapter. They’re so damn cute.

Have now read the whole thing

Good story, I'm curious about how it will continue/end. At the moment this almost feels like dark romance for me, which usually isn't my ideal read but I'm so hooked by the story xD

There are some spelling mistakes or wonky sentences every now and then, which i think could easily be found if either you or a beta read the story out loud (belive me it works). Sometimes there are too many words and sometimes it feels like some sentences are missing words.

Lucius is an intriguing character, I both want to like and root for him while I'm also sad that it seems like he's on the wrong side. Will forever hold onto hope that he's either a spy, will turn spy or will save the day when/if Harry either gets caught or is in a sticky situation (no pun intended).

Will confess that I'm mostly skipping the smutty parts, not because they aren't good but because smut isn't really my thing and I feel weird being 25 and reading about 15 year olds doing stuff xD (no blame on those who do enjoy it)

As for the plot it's been well pased as well, I like how you've written the characters and the subtle changes you've made (like how Crabbe and Goyle aren't as dumb) it makes more sense to why Draco would stand them. Sometimes I'm confused if it's based on the books or movies because I've seen passages from both I think? But I assume it's a mix based on what fits best for the storyAll in all: looking forward to read more! If you need to talk about ideas or something to shake loose then my pms are open if not, then remember that it's not so much what you want to happen but how your characters would act and react to what have already happened

Really enioying reading this, your writing is really good and the story has a nice flow to it. Although I hope draco gets a reality check soon, because his obnoxious "I'm best and Harry can't have a life unless it's 100% me" is grating on my nerves xD (in a fitting way)

Just one small detail- moscow is generally warmer than London in summerI also like the paralleles between Snape and Lilly and Draco and Harry. I just hope Draco gets to learn from Snape's mistake

I usually save my reviews for when I've read the whole thing, but as this is such a long story I'll comment when there is something specific for a certain chapterAnd thus, here we are at chapter oneI normally don't read things with mates- it's just not my cup of tea at all. However as previously stated I adored the prequel to this story, so I'll try!

Interesting start for this chapter. Personally I think draco almost feels too mature for being five, especially as we kinda follow his thoughts. Had it been some kind of outside perspective I think it would have been easier to make him not seem so old, but also his speech pattern makes me forget he's supposedly 5. Also because I myself was 0% interested in love, crushes or thinking people were pretty at that age I kind of have a hard time reading what Draco thinks about Harry. However I'm still immensely curious and will continue reading!

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I read your AN that you have a writers block, and I think its excellent that you still (then at least) want to contine this story. I've myself been in creative blocks and it sucks, it really does. However I'd like to say this- don't force more than what you have. Set ridiculously low goals: like writing for 5 minutes or 200 words, it doesn't have to be good. Either you get in the mood and you continue writing as long as you want or you stop after that time and you listen to yourself- that it's enough for that day

Still here

Hope u didnt forget about us :,(

I cried

What happens when they go to school

Enemy’s?

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oh don't mind me... just sweetening my coffee with tears of anguish...

FINALLY ~~~~~~~