Reviews for Fate: Shattered Moon
Ryner510 chapter 3 . 9/18/2015
I can't tell if Shiro getting or not lol. And I love how Rin try to get to the point by saying "join us or die" lol :,)
Undeadhero143 chapter 3 . 9/18/2015
wow, Rin is evil
DestinyVain chapter 3 . 9/17/2015
Those prisoners must be scared shitless in front of beautifully smiling rin hehehe
Windninja1000 chapter 3 . 9/17/2015
Great chapter! Can't wait till the next chapter! :D
Guest chapter 3 . 9/17/2015
Rin the mob boss with Shirou and the other Servants as her enforcers with Illya and Sakura as their diplomatic front. Yeah, you know you were thinking it.
RougeKing chapter 3 . 9/17/2015
Hahaha awesome chapter sucks for torchwick and his little group, I almost feel bad for him, almost
Iskandar06 chapter 3 . 9/17/2015
Hahahahhaha i liked it and wait for another update
MetaTR0N chapter 3 . 9/17/2015
Nice chapter. Keep up the good work :D
cardo076 chapter 3 . 9/17/2015
I LOVE IT! This changes canon so much that nothing short of divine intervention will get it back on track.
OverLord Wang-Yu chapter 3 . 9/17/2015
So Long Short Story, Shirou And Archer Merged, Illya Now Can Live Naturally, Saber Was Revived As Rin's Servant, And Roman Became An Slave...BEST CHAPTER SO FAR!

GOOD LUCK!
Selias chapter 3 . 9/17/2015
"Saber actually stopped her aging thanks to Avalon's powers, so she would in fact know how it is too look older than she actually is!"

I think you got that backwards. Since her aging was stopped, she would look YOUNGER than she actually is. Also, that's the wrong version of "to."
redeyeshaman chapter 3 . 9/17/2015
Damn, you surely put Rin character in a "Good Image". Cant wait for the next chapter.
tH1s chapter 2 . 8/24/2015
Continue you work and please do not loose sight of the goal of the story, to get back home.

Do not do the expected and make them huntsmen. They should have their own agenda that should cross with RWBy a few times but not merge.
kyugan chapter 2 . 8/19/2015
well this is interesting.
Can't wait to see more.
Also, Roman certainly has bad luck with women doesn't he? RWBY, Glynda, Cinder, Emerald...it's like the only woman not out to make him look like an ass is Neo.
Also, kinda disappointed Roman didn't make a crack about Rider referring to Sakura as her 'Master'.
Given how the Servant dresses, that'd be prime snark material right there.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/17/2015
Can't wait for the next chapter
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