Reviews for Fate: Shattered Moon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I can't tell if Shiro getting or not lol. And I love how Rin try to get to the point by saying "join us or die" lol :,) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, Rin is evil |
![]() ![]() ![]() Those prisoners must be scared shitless in front of beautifully smiling rin hehehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Can't wait till the next chapter! :D |
![]() ![]() Rin the mob boss with Shirou and the other Servants as her enforcers with Illya and Sakura as their diplomatic front. Yeah, you know you were thinking it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha awesome chapter sucks for torchwick and his little group, I almost feel bad for him, almost |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahahhaha i liked it and wait for another update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. Keep up the good work :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! This changes canon so much that nothing short of divine intervention will get it back on track. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Long Short Story, Shirou And Archer Merged, Illya Now Can Live Naturally, Saber Was Revived As Rin's Servant, And Roman Became An Slave...BEST CHAPTER SO FAR! GOOD LUCK! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Saber actually stopped her aging thanks to Avalon's powers, so she would in fact know how it is too look older than she actually is!" I think you got that backwards. Since her aging was stopped, she would look YOUNGER than she actually is. Also, that's the wrong version of "to." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, you surely put Rin character in a "Good Image". Cant wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() Continue you work and please do not loose sight of the goal of the story, to get back home. Do not do the expected and make them huntsmen. They should have their own agenda that should cross with RWBy a few times but not merge. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well this is interesting. Can't wait to see more. Also, Roman certainly has bad luck with women doesn't he? RWBY, Glynda, Cinder, Emerald...it's like the only woman not out to make him look like an ass is Neo. Also, kinda disappointed Roman didn't make a crack about Rider referring to Sakura as her 'Master'. Given how the Servant dresses, that'd be prime snark material right there. |
![]() ![]() Can't wait for the next chapter |