Reviews for Fate: Shattered Moon
Ryner510 chapter 2 . 8/17/2015
Hmm Archer? saber? The king with gold R
armor(forgot his name) Or could be a thing? Hmm
Windninja1000 chapter 2 . 7/23/2015
Great chapter! Can't wait till the next one! :D
AVP chapter 2 . 7/2/2015
...Oh dear God. If this is gonna be an Emilya...
It would be one: Hilarious
Two: weird

I do believe that...they summoned someone else?

Is Archer back? Or is it Saber this time 'round?
Telron chapter 2 . 7/2/2015
lol great story so far and interesting so far
idea.getthe chapter 2 . 7/2/2015
Rin saw... Shirouko...
...
...
...
What? Originally shirouko came from heaven feels route idea and it can't help rwby is dominate by female fighters...
Guest chapter 2 . 6/30/2015
Evil cliffhanger author should be grill in hell, hurried up and update, or I send Bernie and sing I love you song every morning
7thManiac chapter 2 . 7/1/2015
Damn you and that cliffhanger lol
AnimeA55Kicker chapter 2 . 6/30/2015
NNNOOOOO! The dreaded cliffhanger!
The Aura King chapter 2 . 6/30/2015
Liking it so far. if shirou is now shiko or what ever the Ilya shirou mix because of some reaction I'll laugh
ultima-owner chapter 2 . 6/30/2015
Poor Shirou took the blunt of the blast
zerodragon chapter 2 . 6/30/2015
like what i am reading so far, look forward to more.
AVP chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
Where art thou indeed, Ravoleck?
Seems cool enough and great insertion too. Now...

Shirou
Rin
Rider
Sakura
Illya.

SRSR.
UH...
SSRR
no...
RSRS.

RSSR.

I don't think we can make a color out of this boys!
7thManiac chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
Good first attempt and yeah writing can take a while so I can understand slow updates. Unique take on a fate cross having Rin, Illya, Sakura and Rider along with Shirou since usually its only Shriou. That said will be interested in seeing how they fit into RWBY. I imagine they will attend beacon? If so what will be their cool team name? And how will it work with 5 of them. Looking forward to more.
ARSLOTHES chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
pretty good concept, looking forward to the next chapter
Rydan fall chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
Mmm, why o why am I reminded of Symphogear?
Maybe because in the end of seizon(?) one, the Moon was shattered?
Might be something for you to look into, if nothing else, it could provide some background material incase RWBY does not have this.
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