Reviews for Fate: Shattered Moon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm Archer? saber? The king with gold R armor(forgot his name) Or could be a thing? Hmm |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Can't wait till the next one! :D |
![]() ![]() ...Oh dear God. If this is gonna be an Emilya... It would be one: Hilarious Two: weird I do believe that...they summoned someone else? Is Archer back? Or is it Saber this time 'round? |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol great story so far and interesting so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rin saw... Shirouko... ... ... ... What? Originally shirouko came from heaven feels route idea and it can't help rwby is dominate by female fighters... |
![]() ![]() Evil cliffhanger author should be grill in hell, hurried up and update, or I send Bernie and sing I love you song every morning |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn you and that cliffhanger lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() NNNOOOOO! The dreaded cliffhanger! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liking it so far. if shirou is now shiko or what ever the Ilya shirou mix because of some reaction I'll laugh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Shirou took the blunt of the blast |
![]() ![]() ![]() like what i am reading so far, look forward to more. |
![]() ![]() Where art thou indeed, Ravoleck? Seems cool enough and great insertion too. Now... Shirou Rin Rider Sakura Illya. SRSR. UH... SSRR no... RSRS. RSSR. I don't think we can make a color out of this boys! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good first attempt and yeah writing can take a while so I can understand slow updates. Unique take on a fate cross having Rin, Illya, Sakura and Rider along with Shirou since usually its only Shriou. That said will be interested in seeing how they fit into RWBY. I imagine they will attend beacon? If so what will be their cool team name? And how will it work with 5 of them. Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() pretty good concept, looking forward to the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mmm, why o why am I reminded of Symphogear? Maybe because in the end of seizon(?) one, the Moon was shattered? Might be something for you to look into, if nothing else, it could provide some background material incase RWBY does not have this. |