This latest chapter is so frustating. Why in the hell you always made everything so coincidental?! Shirou just happen to meet Cinder, and Cinder was rescued because Ozpin just happen to found Shirou, thus once again made Shirou become a villain.
This is no longer funny but only serve to made the readers frustated.

you guys are giving blue balls...

Well this was a fun read. I'm looking forward to more soon!

Illya is so adorable. XD Also, plot twist, Shirou's now the suspect and not the woman in black! I wonder how the tournament will go?

I love how they are just going on about how they are a threat due to Rin’s misunderstanding. This is fucking perfect mate, keep it coming!

Th for the chapter

Ahahah!
I can't get enough of it... Rin, as always, can't help but screw up whenever she tries to be perfectionist.

But... Why? He didn't even TRY to explain the situation. Archer's actions make no sense at all.

Dude... You're so right. I wonder why nobody seems to think like that on this site. Everyone is always acting so rude, ave badmouthing everyone else in the review section like they are the only person that matters. I try not to think about it though, because responding only adds fuel to the missile.

I hope you decide to finish this at a later date.
A few things you may want to consider for the future (hope this maybe engenders a bit more interest):
Salem is ancient, and was around before the world was Remnant and not whatever the original name was. If you go by Nasuverse terms, that cataclysm could have killed Gaea, instead of it being a perpetual age of the gods.
Dust stops working when it leaves the planet - possible shards of Gaea, which would explain the reason it's full of mana? And the Grimm come out of spawning pools that could quite reasonably be a pseudo Soil of Genesis that one Dead Apostle Ancestor has. Combined with the Crimson Moon Brunestud being imprisoned with his connection to the moon, one possible idea is that Remnant is earth countless thousands of years into the future. Alaya and Gaea are dead, since humanity is no longer the primary species and the cataclysm, the Dead Apostles are dead in the cataclysm, the Crimson Moon was slain by Zelretch resulting in a mutual strike which shattered the moon and froze it in time (explaining why the fragments are stationary), and the Soil of Genesis was found and used by Salem to produce Grimm. She, being the only one left from that time, could very well be a third rate magus with skills in golemancy - a sort of Incarnation of automatons and fake life. Then she sees the power the Servants are throwing around, and knows what they are...
Also Ozpin:Roa. They're basically the same, the only difference is attitude really. Something mind-fucked Roa (maybe Gaea in some last ditch attempt) resulting in Ozpin?
It's a lot of stuff, maybe you can find something usable in it.
Just please, for the love of god, no holy grail producing the black mud that made the grimm or whatever else. It's been done to death.
Have a good new year!

Cinder just have to interrupt on their happiness isn't she.
Ha... When everythings go so well too.
Please beat her down hard, Shirou.
Don't let her go cause other pain again.

Hope Weiss can ask Ruby for a date without causing misunderstanding like Rin has been. Hehe

Again, I'm glad and relief that Illya gotto live her life now. Many horrible things happen to her and I don't often see her get happiness even in fiction.
Thank you so much for this!

Awww.. Illya and Penny are so perfect together.

Damn it. Rin ruin her own reputation here lol.