Reviews for Fate: Shattered Moon
Raging Drake chapter 7 . 10/14/2021
Penny is like a homunculi so her getting along with Illya is a given. liked the chapter
Raging Drake chapter 6 . 10/14/2021
So they started a cafe. The Mapo tofu of kirei is hilarious addition to their menu. Tho I don’t what Illya does there.
Raging Drake chapter 5 . 10/14/2021
Shirou’s harem protagonist EX has activated. Harem aquired.I love how shirou’s instincts scream danger
Raging Drake chapter 4 . 10/14/2021
Hmmm,M looking forward to seeing they’re reactions would be when they find out there’s no magic association
Raging Drake chapter 3 . 10/14/2021
This chapter was hilarious! And saber’s here too! Yay! That an illya got better and shirou got stronger and got memories from the other fate routes as well as archers! Double yay!

And now they have information on the world courtesy of Roman the slave
Raging Drake chapter 2 . 10/14/2021
I wondering how you would handle shirou’s arm contamination potential death problem and illya’s very short lifespan that has at least year left to live
Raging Drake chapter 2 . 10/14/2021
Grammars all good in this chapter. This has an interesting premise with the cast being here. this’ll be a good story
Guest chapter 21 . 10/8/2021
This chapter is the first where characters feel truly ooc, Ilya was far too childish and trusting for it to be believable
Amargi'sNodachi chapter 3 . 9/16/2021
Bahahahahahaha and now Rin is very interested.
anounams chapter 14 . 9/10/2021
Saber is weaker than Heracles just because she has an " incompetent master " who could supply her with much mana they are both well known heroes so their power should be the same but saber has her mind in control while berserker is using muscle memory so against insane Heracles saber should win. That's my opinion
Raging Drake chapter 1 . 9/10/2021
So this is heaven’s feel shirou
IronDeficiency chapter 20 . 8/23/2021
This fanciction is great and all, but having a misunderstanding on this scale is just bloody annoying to be honest. The fact that is going to become a major problem later on is just passing me off mostly because there was barely any development put into this. Also, Ron is letting people discover her bounded field. Sharon did protest to her about destroying it to save a few people, which in my opinion is annoying but makes sense considering his personality...
Literally useless chapter 16 . 8/11/2021
ah cinder, wait until you get gandr'ed
Jacks-Noah chapter 27 . 8/3/2021
Panzer0 chapter 27 . 7/15/2021
Well this story was great and I got pretty sad thinking the author abandoned it but after checking their profile it seems that they were just busy with the whole covid situation. To the author if you're reading this: This is great keep it up! :D
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