Reviews for Fate: Shattered Moon
Prolbo chapter 27 . 5/23/2021
Nice story. A bit simple sometimes, but still nice. Sadly it's over.
Axccel chapter 9 . 4/22/2021
Them: “Hey guys, this looks like what’s keeping the Grimm away.”
Also Them: “Lets mess with it!”
Too dumb to live.
Axccel chapter 6 . 4/22/2021
I’d tell Blake that if terrorism is justified by someone being mean to you, then exterminating your entire species for a bunch of you being race terrorists is justified by your own morals. Or they could just leave and build up their own civilization in Menagerie. I suspect faunus don’t get along well in large numbers. Maybe the different types come into conflict.
Lithse chapter 27 . 4/17/2021
me gusto
Guest chapter 21 . 4/7/2021
To be fair to the author, RWBY as a whole is known to make the characters act dumb for the sake of the plot in the most stupid of manners.
CallMeCayde chapter 27 . 3/19/2021
judging by the last time this guy updated his profile page he had a flu and it's safe to assume his dead
luffy1996 chapter 20 . 12/10/2020
This entire chapter is just infuriatingly stupid. Everything about the conflict felt artificial, there is no way RWBY Characters wouldn't recognize that Rin was making a barrier against the Grimm. They already had evidence of it afterall. But no, they had to turn off their brains to assume it's some kind of WMD. At best Rin should be some kind of mad scientist to them not a criminal mastermind hell bent on destroying them.

This chapter only exists because you wanted to cut off all paths for Fate characters getting along with RWBY and I resent that.
123ABIR123 chapter 27 . 12/9/2020
So is this story dead you should continue writing it as it was very good.
Nikkless chapter 15 . 12/6/2020
even E rank is about 10 times better than normal human
Nikkless chapter 1 . 12/5/2020
hope shirou can use ubw
MageofFlames chapter 27 . 12/3/2020
Just when it was getting good...
Guest chapter 27 . 10/22/2020
So l guess this is dropped huh?... l really like the misunderstanding happening. l hope the misunderstanding got further escalated. Am still very excited over this story but...This looks grim.
MiaMorn chapter 27 . 10/20/2020
Great read
UserIDHere chapter 27 . 9/28/2020
123ABIR123 chapter 27 . 9/9/2020
So is this story dropped? you should continue writing it as it was very good and is one of the best written rwby crossover fanfics.
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