Reviews for Fate: Shattered Moon
Guest chapter 2 . 6/30/2015
Evil cliffhanger author should be grill in hell, hurried up and update, or I send Bernie and sing I love you song every morning
7thManiac chapter 2 . 7/1/2015
Damn you and that cliffhanger lol
AnimeA55Kicker chapter 2 . 6/30/2015
NNNOOOOO! The dreaded cliffhanger!
The Aura King chapter 2 . 6/30/2015
Liking it so far. if shirou is now shiko or what ever the Ilya shirou mix because of some reaction I'll laugh
ultima-owner chapter 2 . 6/30/2015
Poor Shirou took the blunt of the blast
zerodragon chapter 2 . 6/30/2015
like what i am reading so far, look forward to more.
AVP chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
Where art thou indeed, Ravoleck?
Seems cool enough and great insertion too. Now...

Shirou
Rin
Rider
Sakura
Illya.

SRSR.
UH...
SSRR
no...
RSRS.

RSSR.

I don't think we can make a color out of this boys!
7thManiac chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
Good first attempt and yeah writing can take a while so I can understand slow updates. Unique take on a fate cross having Rin, Illya, Sakura and Rider along with Shirou since usually its only Shriou. That said will be interested in seeing how they fit into RWBY. I imagine they will attend beacon? If so what will be their cool team name? And how will it work with 5 of them. Looking forward to more.
ARSLOTHES chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
pretty good concept, looking forward to the next chapter
Rydan fall chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
Mmm, why o why am I reminded of Symphogear?
Maybe because in the end of seizon(?) one, the Moon was shattered?
Might be something for you to look into, if nothing else, it could provide some background material incase RWBY does not have this.
SilverstormXD chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
I doubt that shirou would take light of the situation and only summon the twin swords he has no info on ANYTHING in the rwbyverse but I digress this is really good for a first fix good hob man and to think you have not watched season 1 of rwby
fuji92 chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
Hmm...interesting, so this one takes the Heavens Feel path isn't it? I wonder what is going to happen with them. Gonna watch this one further to know if this is going to be a good fic or not. - Fuji92
GOJIRASMASH chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
Might seem a little nitpicky, but technically Rider wouldn't be able to "see" anything since her blindfold takes away all functionality of her eyes including sight. However, I'm willing to overlook that fact because her hearing is probably acute enough to hear the machine she was referring to and pinpoint its direction (and she probably inferred that it was flying due to how far up she was).

The implications of Rider taking control of the Nevermore is quite interesting, though. It suggests under the right circumstances that Grimm can be trained into obedience. Lets also take into account how sought after Rider would be: a person able to take control of Grimm...

Interesting enough so far, and one of the few stories to use Heaven's Feel. Also, don't feel to bad about the updating speed: I've got fifteen stories favorited, and only two have updated since summer started.
idea.getthe chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
This is interesting... Very original in some part...
And please... I repeat... Please... Don't let Nora and Ilya meet... And luckily taiga is not in rwby world...
deathstalker982 chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
just one question, since saber technically exists in the land of the fae, not the throne of hero, and shiro has the only connection to the land of fae still with him, will we be seeing her in this fic, because she is definitely my favorite character from the fate franchise.

also, will we see characters from other fate stories? other servants?
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