interesting fic... but please never let someone curse "By the Root" again please...
Doing so kinda irritates me.

I know it started due to gabriel blessing doing it in his Hill of Swords fic (I like his stories btw) but please don't it.

love this story!

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I'm really liking this story so far. Rin is being best girl, as always, and Torchwick is being a sleazebag, as always. I don't find anything wrong with your writing so far; in fact, I quite enjoy it. Also, any ideas on pairings, or will you keep those on the backburner for now? I would hate for this story to get ruined by a rushed or forced pairing. Take your time. Looking forward to more chapters!

Is Shirou going to wind up working at Junior's Bar? He did have a part-time job at Bar Coppenhagen back in Fuyuki, and and now that he has Archer's body he might even be allowed to work behind the Bar instead of simply stacking barrels & taking inventory.

Also, why do I have the strangest feeling Ruby is going to start calling Shirou Senpai if she ever sees UBW?

Nice chapter. Keep up the good work :D

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for some reason I had an image of Ilya pulling a '_' (No Game No Life) and rubbing the poor faunus' furry appendages while proclaiming she's not a 'dirty old man'.

Also, Rin is terrifying.

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Ahhh that eas really good, I really love how you have portraited Rin's character. Also will they meet with the cast of Beacon soon? Or will they roam around for a bit doing their own thing? Since they now know that they're stuck here and all. Great job, keep it up :)

Like the way Rin was portrayed here, looking forward to the next chapter.

Ok I loved this it was sorta an infodump but the middle to end was really good especially how real the fsn characters were acting torchwick...not so much I think it's gonna be a huge problem for you to humanize the characters of rwby because unlike fsn that has had a very long run and is able to create some very humanlike characteristics for their characters rwby is sorta...very very very one dimensional ok Im cut for time here but if ever you wAnna talk about fics and stuff we have a group down in Facebook if you want you could join anytime see you of and never forget ARCHER is gar

th1s guy

Sorry, it got cut off.

Most likely result: Shirou, Saber, Rin and Illya become huntsmen. Making team...IRIS? Is that a color? Yes, Illya is the leader because it's hilarious.

Sakura and Rider would...50/50 follow them or stay at home.

So yah, probably huntsmen. And they already have no chance in getting home, realistically. Rin and Shirou are the only ones who would be able to get them home, and it will take Rin DECADES to get her dimension travellibg to actually get them close to their original dimension, let alone theirbhome dimension, considering Remnant is probably very far away from their original dimensional branch.

th1s guy. Dude, you do realize that we hav Shirou here right? He's going to charge headfirst into becoming a Huntsman, and since he is the most tech-savvy, would probably like an education. Saber would try to follow Shirou, Illya would follow her Onii-chan, Sakura might NOT follow Shirou, Rider follows Sakura and Rin does whatever the fuck she wants.

Most likely result:
Shirou, Saber, Rin and

Prepare your tastebuds, Torchwick and co., for Shirou's EX-rank cooking!

lol torchwick. Bad move man.

He's going to enjoy the home comedy though.