If this story ever gets an update i would be a happy man

I am absolutely loving this story, its ine if the best I've read in a while. I hope you get a chance to finish writing it, as I'd love to read the end. Keep up the fantastic work, and I hope you update soon.

Shadow x

"I'm Back" *Last Online 5 Years Ago*

ever since the end of the series my interest in the world of ice and fire has lowered but recently i rewatched the series and it just didn't feel the same anymore, the last 2 seasons kind ruined it
the i discovered this fanfiction, i decided to read it and this story really made me fall in love with the story aggain, this fanfiction really was a great experience to read through
this last update was posted long ago so i don't know if you will ever read this review but if you do
thank you for writing this amazing story.

Seizing Harrenhal is hardly a dangerous precedent, Robbs maternal Grandmother was Minisa Whent so he has a strong claim to it anyway, Only Edmure has a slightly better claim

Dear author, you healed me from my 10 year heart break from Robb Stark's death. Thank you from the bottom of my heart!

You can't see a sailboat from 36 miles away on the ocean.

You can't even see a sailboat from 10 mi away on the open ocean.

If he didn't have to hold the door, he wouldn't be Hodor. He'd be Willis.

500 leagues to the north of King's Landing is Winterfell

You're telling me that a bunch of Lannister soldiers were just hanging out in the north waiting for Jaime Lannister.

I love the story. But you are inconsistent a lot. Sansa is 17 years old, flowered, a woman grown. She's of marriageable age now.

Having Willis Tyrell think he has to wait for her to be older for Rob to give consent is kind of a little ridiculous.

Oberyn has really screwed up his entire family. He is the reason Arianne thinks screwing everybody is okay. He is the reason Quentyn had to be fostered away at the age of seven, and he is the reason Doran's wife ended up separating from her husband.

WHAT! Benjen! Insane! What a madlad! Hahhahahhaha

Ugh, I seriously dislike Arianne. Her games are tasteless and she is dumb as a brick. She reminds me of Cersei. She thinks she is great at the game, but her only power is between her legs.

I love your take on The Others!

I am a forever anti Jon/Arianne. It's such a bad pairing...