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Greatazuredragon chapter 14 . 7/9/2015 Interesting chapter, nice work. |
Gremlin Jack chapter 14 . 7/8/2015 Taylor teaching Rachel. That is new, color me interested. |
Gremlin Jack chapter 13 . 7/8/2015 Nice interlude. Some spelling and grammar issues, minor stuff. |
OSR fanatic chapter 13 . 7/7/2015 Great Story! :) Update Soon! :) |
HellKing666 chapter 13 . 7/7/2015 ... Well, a hero tutoring a villain... I wish I could say this is new, but it's already been done in Intrepid, this is just funnier because both parties are aware of what the other knows. Danny perspective, glad to see he is still standing by Taylor, yet still having some reservations. I didn't see Zero Fucks get activated... I guess I just missed it. |
Greatazuredragon chapter 13 . 7/7/2015 Hehe Teacher Taylor is on the job! Nice chapter, good work. |
Greatazuredragon chapter 12 . 7/6/2015 Very good, you portrayed Rachel very well, wonder if she will start treating Taylor as her alpha or something. Good work. |
HellKing666 chapter 12 . 7/5/2015 So... basically, Taylor decided to beat them up, to work out their issues... Uh, I think she had a 'No fucks given' influence somewhere to get that, she still has a kind of rotten reputation with me still since, hey, there could have been better ways. For now, I'll give her a pass here, hope this particular approach of being a thug social worker for misunderstood villains isn't going to bite her in the ass. |
Edale chapter 11 . 7/4/2015 OK, I think I missed something. How the HELL did Bitch find Taylor's house? If that's not covered in the next chapter it's a HUGE plot-hole. |
Greatazuredragon chapter 11 . 7/4/2015 This will be an interesting meeting. Rachel will probably be quite agressive up to the point she notice's her dog is well cared, then it will probably turn to wary confusion. Thanks for the update. |
HellKing666 chapter 11 . 7/4/2015 Rachel... that is one ballsy move, seriously. Now then... I am wondering how Taylor is going to react, will this be the slap in the face that I need to make this Taylor tolerable? Or will she just reinforce why I don't like the character by trying to do a quick 'beat her down and arrest her!' idea. ... The only question I have is how the hell she managed to find Taylor so quickly, Angelica is a sure sign of course but, that was kind of quick to jump into her house. At least Taylor did her homework on the ones that got away. |
Edale chapter 10 . 7/2/2015 bettery - Battery I wasn't able to figure out whose PoV this was until you said so in the ending AN. I've NEVER seen Dauntless portrayed as a cop before, and never as someone in their 30-40's. He's always portrayed as someone mid-20's at the oldest, who had the potential to beat Endbringers once he hit the 30-40's, because of how his powers SLOWLY powered up the items he was carrying, seemly without limit. It's often said that it took more than a year for his Arclance to become more than a glorified taser. |
Dagon Draconis chapter 10 . 7/2/2015 You writing one heck of a story I'll say, however you did call Battery "Jane" in Ch. 4 at the very end. Other than that, Great story! Keep it up. |
Killer Hamster chapter 10 . 7/2/2015 Really liked this story! Looking forward to how far you are going to take this. So the PRT are blatantly investigating cape personal lives? Well, it might backfire in a terrible way. Even creating a villain that can't handle. Also, what are the limits Taylor can achieve with her tropes? Can she just activate Cosmic Entity or Physical God tropes and become pretty OP. Or her powers have hard limits? Or her imagination? |
HellKing666 chapter 10 . 7/2/2015 Hmm... well then, seems that the PRT has corrupted members within it... not entirely a surprise but THIS would certainly be a kick to Taylor's stupid black and white mindset if she finds out Grue became a Ward, and learns the reasons behind it. In a way it turned out for the better, Brian and Aisha are going to be in a comfortable Wards program... who knows, he might even be a better leader if he's older than Aegis, stupid rule... Wait, nevermind, he'll likely be in probation because villain roots and all. |