Huh? Wonder how Rachel got caught up with Hookwolf when he was attacking HQ? Should be an interesting story. Last chapter had a good showing for Indominus, but this should be much more fun to read!

Danny's view on Rachel's monster dog was pretty awesome! Nice one! Thanks for the chapter!

Nice chapter, good work.

Good chapter, always nice to occasionally throw in a different point of view. Also helps that this was pretty well done, hitting the right notes for her father, at least in my opinion.

very good work

And then Taylor said... MINE!

Seriously, she should do this more often. Bad guys have the best stuff...

A few things. First, adding a parentheses after an "O" (like you did for Double O Seven) generally means "of"(Edit: just realized that that was in another chapter). Secondly, there's a typo shortly after she sticks her hand in the boiling water:"Shooting me look". Third, I noticed a lot of perspective errors in the Miss Militia bit (switching between she/I). Finally, you had "having memorizing it the first time".

Fyi, it's fore, not four.

No driver skill?
Thank you for the update!

She needs to unlock INVENTORY somewhat.

Hehe indeed, take everything AND the kitchen sink! ;p
Nice chapter, good work..

*puts aviators on* deal with it

That's right man, Taylor just stole all your guns and gear commando style, before driving away like a boss. She even took your tinker-tech super revolver.

Hopefully we'll see more of her using it as part of her gear.

Why do I have the feeling Taylor's gonna regret not listening to that guy at the end...

no Badass driver trope?

Very good