Reviews for Completion
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
Thats it?
tonithefluffy chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
tehe the end made me laugh. Cute.
ChicagoKnockout chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
Hey great story here! Could you do us all a favor, if you plan to put up another chapter, please use a smaller font!

Didn't mean to sound rude!


Update soon!

Mistress Martin
Velocity9 chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
Keeper of the Dreams chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
MORE! MORE! MORE! How can you live with yourself? You just leave it at that! This is torture! Not nice, not nice at all!
Wolgirl chapter 1 . 7/20/2001
were is the next chapter?
guess chapter 1 . 4/8/2001
finish it or else!
Bookworm chapter 1 . 2/22/2001
More? Because it's good. So, More?
Thundercat chapter 1 . 2/14/2001
oooooooooooh more! write a sequel!
Sirius chapter 1 . 12/13/2000
Continue this please
Borath chapter 1 . 12/8/2000
Not bad, not bad. Bit short, and crytic, so, if you value your existence... KEEP WRITTING! Or everyone whos written here is going to hunt you down and make you!
Ghost chapter 1 . 11/24/2000
Not a bad start, but too short for a complete review. Only suggested change. "Xanatos offered

me a... proposition." The double meaning would make for a much funnier line.
Nicky Dee chapter 1 . 11/20/2000
Hmmm... Not bad, not bad. Needs work but not bad. You get the idea from Christine Morgan? I'm a fan of hers. She's great. Keep up the good work!
O chapter 1 . 11/19/2000
Uh...use big enough font?
Katana chapter 1 . 11/19/2000
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