Reviews for Our Blades Are Sharp |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Read this from DannyBlack's favourite stories section and I understand why, excellent story telling and I'm about to move on to The Red Reign, only criticism I can think of is the speed of Sansa's change of perspective (aware it's an AU but still slightly jarring at points). Everything else seems to fit the story while still making me think of the original characters more or less seamlessly. Without further ado, Red Reign here we go... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad Arya and Sansa are bonding |
![]() ![]() ![]() Barbrey doesn't seen too hostile Sansa and Dom are sweet Robb and Jon love them but they are a bit soft. I mean that time period was brutal and its good they aren't bloodthirsty. But it was life or death |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad they seem happy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope that wasn't Osha. I like her character for the most part |
![]() ![]() ![]() all due disrespect tommen is wuss |
![]() ![]() ![]() domeric is cold. brr brrr |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't know why I stopped last time it could be all these pov's of people that aren't the main character probably. its pretty annoying to be honest almost makes me want to stop again I have 5 more chapters before I even get his pov. Then after that 7 more until his again. |
![]() ![]() Your dialogue is purely excellent. The Jon & Jamie scene from last chapter was GRRM-level |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm from the very beginning there is many time expressed the idea that boltons will be ruling the north … now this being their ambition comes as no suprise to anyone who seen/ read GoT/soIaF however how do they ever want to accomplish such? Admittedly sansa marying into their line would be a good start. However is that enough? What about the bannermen? The way i see it they have two options 1. The waiting game be loyal but ambitious try to have as powerful rep as possible … in preparation if the starks die out (males) now this is very unlikely without any arranged incidents as rickon and bran are way too young to be in battle and even if not it is in no way gurantee that the rest will die… 2. The waiting game and when opportunity presents itself COVERTLY eliminate the heirs … this i find likely for boltons, in accordance with their ambition. However, this i fond hogky unlikely as the deaths could not be linked to them in any way and not even sansa could ever find out…. And maybe even domeric would not have stomach for it. 3. The original strategyeliminate starks and takeover north this is extremely unlikely to aucceed unless majority of norrth nobles and their soldiers are dead eg. By red wedding In conclusion i wonder how author will spin it? Will boltons take over north? Will they come out of it smelling as roses? Or be hated as usurpers? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow how dumb is that?…. Insisting on fighting a war again even after he knowingly put homself in situation where it was highly likely he will be captured … at least here he insured the safety of his progrny but still i am hardly a fan … and honestly? I would not mind if he is killed off… |
![]() ![]() ![]() God damnit Ned. Why do you so often abandon logic in favor of catering to Caitlyn’s sensitivity |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Thanks! |